| "Destined for Me" Reviews/Comments [ 71 ] |
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Title: haha, the beginning
Reviewed By: CrystalAmber [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2010 20:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That beginning part made me laugh and snicker a lot... JUst think what Sesshy's gonna do when he finds out that's he is hugging a pillow.. haha, reminds me a little of pranks. Luv this fic!
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Reviewed By: Sziraface [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2009 02:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I highly doubt you even look at reviews anymore judging by the fact that the last review was posted over a year ago at this point, however, as much as I enjoyed your story and love love LOVED it, you have horrible spelling/grammar and I would like to edit your story and perhaps get you some more reviews for it as it is AMAZING. It even made me cry and that's hard to do. If you'd be interested in letting me edit your story and reposting it you can email me @ sziraface@gmail.com (this goes for any other author that reads this review, I love editing and reading stories)
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Reviewed By: kags-sesshy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2008 22:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. but u spelled ramen wrong there is no "I" between the "E" and the "N"
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Title: me again
Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2008 20:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh and ignore Ultimategamer982 he/she/it is wrong u didn't force your writing and you still have your talent!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2008 20:35 CDT
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I LOVED IT! you had me laughing,yelling,seething,crying,awwwing,laughing again,yelling again,seething again,crying again,awwing again, laughing some more...... you get the picture don't you? lol and i can't believe you ONLY GOT 66 REVIEWS! 67 including mine but only 66 do these people have noo taste? or do they not see one of the best stories ever (that is a sess/kag)WELL KEEP RIGHTING U R A GOOD AUTHOR!
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Title: THE BEST STORY EVER!!
Reviewed By: cas0239 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2006 19:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have given your story a 10 out of 10 for creativity and originality. I loved every minute of it. It kept me waiting for the next chapter and always in suspense. I hope to read more wonderful stories by you. As far as Sess/Kag pairings this is one of the best that I have ever read. You spelled some words wrong or paragraphed words differently but I understood the meaning. Please continue to write wonderful stories. I love em and will continue to be one of your biggest fanfic fans. Keep up the good work. Ja Ne Minna
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Reviewed By: Ultimategamer982 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2006 23:43 CDT
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dear write, i have read this story from start to finish and i have to admit that the ending chapters, from chapter 32 and on have been a large dissapointment. In my personal veiw, after chapter 32 u began to force ideas to make the story go on instead of writing in a creative way that came voluntarly like in the begining. This story ending is a good thing b/c is it a mercy killing. I will not b reading your next story for i think your talent has diminished over time and it is a shame for you possesed so much talent and feeling in your writing. I hope you take this reveiw to thought. Sincerely- Ultimategamer982
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Title: OMG!!!
Reviewed By: MistressKagome4U [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I LOVE IT. I've been reading it chapter by chapter, chapter by chapter, sine your publish. Sorry I haven't left a whole bunch of reveiws, but normally all i do is copy several chapters to a disk and read them upstairs on my laptop. Anyways, PLEASE give us a long, juicy lemon in the last chapter. PLEASE!!!
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2006 22:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It took me nearly three weeks to read it...but I love your fic! ^-^ update again soon please
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Reviewed By: McSlave44 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2006 04:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
WOW!! Just wow, you are an awsome story teller! *mouth hanging open staring in wonder* WoW.....I love it! Did I say WOW Yet? 'Cause Wow!
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Title: Destined For Me
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 21:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 11:42 CST
Comment/Review:
Congrats on your nominations! This story deserves it! I cant wait to see how the rest of the story unfolds. It almost seems as if you are reaching the end of this tale, I will be sad to see it done but also happy that I got to read such a marvelous piece of work. Ja!
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Title: Destined For Me
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 14:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Destined For Me
Reviewed By: violett407 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet again another wonderful chapter. I always look forward to receiving your updates, please keep them coming. I also enjoy how the story never gets stale and there are so many other directions it can still go. I have read a lot of fanfiction, and i have to say, this one has held my interest like no other. Congratulations and keep it going! :)
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Reviewed By: BelleSoleil80013 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 17:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved your story!
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