| "Lifeless Love" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2005 18:33 CST
Comment/Review:
UPDATE!^_^
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Inugirlfan1(Not logged in) On: December 24, 2005 15:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude! If there was a puddle of blood in my house I would probably get down and play with it! Okay...in my mind I would...but I would totally freak if that really happened. Anyway, awesome-ness! I hate Kagura though....Always have -Chuckles- So...maybe I am just a lITTLE jealous of her. >_< I would love to have a Sesshou ghost in my house! ...Lucky Rin... OH YEAH! U-P-D-A-T-E! Whats that spell?! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: Pricess-in-Training On: December 23, 2005 16:56 CST
Comment/Review:
WOW I feel Rin if I saw a pool of blood in mine house, find out two people died in my house and now their two ghost in my house I think I was going crazy too. Sesshy to the rescue. I feel bad for Kagura I understand she made a mistake but she sorry for it. That's alot coming from me because I'M usally anti Kagura.
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Reviewed By: icygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 15:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
no this chapter is great also if you could thanks to update moreoften but i don't want to order you! i have enjoyed very much reading this chapter! bye and merry christmas! see you soon i hope!
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Reviewed By: icygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 23:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i love it please update soon! also i have a few questions! is "him" is Naraku? AND what about inuyasha's thoughts about his brother's death? A VERY ORIGINAL AND PROMISINGLY GREAT STORY! i look forward to read the next bye! and have a good day!
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