| "The Revolution" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: darkchun On: April 01, 2006 14:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You excellence in writing again manifests itself. You attention to details and descriptive writing enthralls the senses. Your works competely engross the audience and submerge them into the depths of your creativity.
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Reviewed By: Someone New On: November 26, 2005 21:07 CST
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Someday... someday... you might want to actually think about finishing a fanfiction/lemon...
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Title: Ranko-chan
Reviewed By: Hiryo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 14:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The sex-scenes where good as always . . . But what of Ranma NOT checking out the competition i.e. learning/observing the opponents techniques? Or at least how to fence . . . . I hope you also can explain why Ranma is now as unfaithful as she is. On another note, you should read what those on http://www.anifics.com/forums/ think of your turn of the story. I think you'll find that interesting. Furthermore, would you honor me with your rating on my site, which you can find in my profile? On my homepage under 'contact me' there you could rate yourself . . . please. 9.9
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Title: Ranma-chan
Reviewed By: Hiryo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 13:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The change got Ranma-CHAN that much that she isn't faithful anymore? Oh again you've updated. That's very considerable of you.
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Reviewed By: Rubel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 23:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool Story. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Z-Boy On: November 13, 2005 06:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I'll be damn...... Wow, I should've known that you intend to use Revolutionary Girl Utena to cross Ranma over with. Hmmm.... Girl with Pink hair and warm blue eyes... ...Purple Haired girl with tanned skin. Roses... What really gave it away was when you first mentioned Ohtori Academy. Good stuff btw. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sakura_Taisen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2005 08:55 CST
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Reviewed By: Sakura_Taisen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2005 08:55 CST
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ha! I knew it, the mystery x-over is Utena isn't it and Shi is Anthy!
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Reviewed By: redeyedwarlord On: November 10, 2005 17:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet another interesting fic from you that probably won't be finished, but it was a good read for half an hour.
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Reviewed By: goku_90504 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 23:13 CST
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This is an odd fic whats going on
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