| "Tonsou Ninja" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: fdmvgrthbbfb On: July 09, 2006 12:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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update soon im diein for more
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Reviewed By: TheTornRaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2006 22:21 CDT
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You have combined a brilliant writing style and an intruging story line to weave quite an exciting tale. The fighting scenes were very well done, providing a good description of what is going on while still maintaining a decent pace. I eagerly await your next update.
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Reviewed By: Setolover2 On: March 15, 2006 21:29 CST
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I'm baaaaaaaaaaccccckkkkk........... COOL! I love tha new chapptie. Update soon. Yosh!
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Reviewed By: Setolover2 On: January 21, 2006 12:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! Naruto has grown up so much. New techinces and meeting Gaara as the Kazakage and meeting his girlfriend. Wow. Up date soon. YOSH!
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Reviewed By: Stina On: January 06, 2006 10:16 CST
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hey hey hey im in school right now ^____________^ love your story I think I like reading yours a lot more than reading the actual manga very kool I like how u gave the red chakra ball the power of ice instead of he typical power for red like fire . nnnnnnnno now im bored omg I actually spelt the name write for this story when I searched it
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Reviewed By: Hidetada On: January 03, 2006 18:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story!!! I'm completly blown away!! YOu have a lot of imagination!! Transfomrning the rasengas.... THe bloodline!! I started reading and have not been able to stop
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Reviewed By: Hidetada On: January 03, 2006 17:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed your first chapter! I really liked that you wrote it in the present tense rather than in the past tense; it gives the story life... Umm... Great Job!!
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Reviewed By: Stina On: December 21, 2005 08:44 CST
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hola i love the chapter ^__________^ this story is really kool !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sry it took for ever to review im so lazzy and when imnot my computer its being its usallay pain in the ass self lol ! anywayz update soon update soon ttul
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Title: MORE!MAS!NYJA!
Reviewed By: vixypixy_no.9 On: December 16, 2005 19:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must read more! I highly encourage you to finish this little ficcie. But, you need to work on coherence. I kinda lost you in the whole battle scene. othe than that, I love it!!! ^_^ So now I must say...MORE!MORE!MORE!*Yells desperatelty, voice all raspy*
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Reviewed By: Setolover2 On: December 11, 2005 18:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow....I love the story. Who knew Naruto had a clan that was power hungery. Wow. Update soon.
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Title: HOLA
Reviewed By: stina On: December 02, 2005 10:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLA MIS AMIGO heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy im alive yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy ^_____________________________________________^ im fianlly just about all better yippie did read the chapter yet but get around to it , i love this story i like the other one too but havent read it in so long forgot a lot about it im gunna re read it chapie by chappies eich will take forever !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i might actully come online today yippie !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! now ive missied 8 days of school yayyyyyyyyyyyyyy im so frikin far behind im gunna cry im gunna be like after school for a month anywayz ill read your story now cyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa adios ^__________________________________^
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Reviewed By: Aqua Alex 99999 On: November 21, 2005 13:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My computer won't let me log on. My user is Aquaalex99999 I believe that you do, do good action scenes. and I am enjoying this story. It has a decent plot unlike most of the stories i have come across. Keep writing and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: kpkchq [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 00:50 CST
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i just read chapter 2, i thought ur *fighting writing* was good :) umm not very good at tips though *make naruto kick-ass* !!
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Reviewed By: kpkchq [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 00:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U gotta keep going ! if u stop i will personally slaughter u... this is really good, oooooooo, so many things that could happen *laughs at myself* but seriously keep up the good work :)
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Reviewed By: Stina On: November 17, 2005 15:34 CST
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hola mis amigo your story was awsome i defnalty think you should continue it! i love how you so much detail into nartos house i could actully picture it . and the Suspense O__________O lol. well i have no lifes tory this time amybee next time lol ttul !!!! ^___________^
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