| "What I Am Not (or 20 Truths About IshiHime)" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Vejhed [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 21:04 CDT
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I totally agree with everyone else! It's totally in character at all times and it's really believable. I like Ishida's characterization in this. Sometimes it's hard to decide what he might be thinking about because of his pride, chivalry, and nerdiness. What you have to keep in mind is that even though he's a nerdy, chivalrous gentleman, he's still a teenage boy and has to be treated as such. This also means he has the same thoughts as any other teenage boy. Fortunately, you capture his thoughts and character very nicely. Great job! (= ]
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Reviewed By: Shiseiten On: February 11, 2008 23:27 CST
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i liked these. they were really great. i agree with what everyone else said about ishida not being to occ, and i especially liked the first half. ishixhime fics are so much fun to read, i always love reading your stuff.
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Reviewed By: odd_oddball@yahoo.com On: February 24, 2007 13:43 CST
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i like the way you write ishida, the way it stays in character. i can almost see your works being depicted in the manga or in the anime. that's how believable your ishida and inoue is to me. i hope you keep it up.
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Reviewed By: CrAzEdGirl622 (not signed in) On: December 18, 2005 03:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Omigosh! This is so amazing! I really love how you always capture Ishida and Inoue so perfectly well! I really hope you continue writing more, you make your stories so believable and never put then out of character!
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Reviewed By: lonely_dreamlover On: December 16, 2005 02:27 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the most serious IshiHime fic among all of the IshiHime fics I've read. I could really feel the pairing and for once, Orihime is taken seriously. Hope you make more IshiHime fics!!! I'll be looking forward to it!!!
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Reviewed By: FlameTwirler [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2005 19:43 CST
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dang, that's fantastic! I wonder...as the series continues will you continue to add to the dimension of the characters? regardless, i liked the introspection on both parts
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Reviewed By: Cal---Reflector On: December 15, 2005 16:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
A solid read, and I very much like the idea of using 20 separate short drabbles to cover such a long relationship; it may be something that I could try in the future for other pairings, even other fandoms. I particularly liked the earlier drabbles, which covers area predating the canon that we don't see. And I know it wasn't the easiest thing to acknowledge that Ichigo is first and foremost on Inoue's mind, Ishihime zealot that you are. You've done well.
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Reviewed By: esotaria On: December 15, 2005 16:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sooooooooooooooooo cute!!! =333333 I love it! Ishida's pervy without being OOC, how being in love just sort of comes upon them....this was beautiful.
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