| "Oh, Sensei..." Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Kakashisonlygurl On: December 10, 2008 13:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! It has to be one of my favorite fanfics ever! I was so nervous that he would wake up that I was blushing and biting my lip at the same time! Which was wierd cause the first time I read it I was at school. Lol. Any ways Write another one please Kakasaku has to be my favorite pairings!! Love ya!
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Reviewed By: coke_cola123 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2007 01:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is the first fanfic that I read with lemons... I must agree also that kakashi didn't woke up.. maybe if he woke up it's much better.... still it's your work and it's fairly good.
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Reviewed By: Classicaltwist2 On: September 25, 2006 17:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Beautiful descriptions and very well written; however, I agree that it's impossible that Kakashi wouldn't wake up and the story would have had a nice touch if he had waken up while she was there anyway. Great concept though.
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Reviewed By: DarkAngelB [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2006 23:59 CST
Comment/Review:
DAMMIT I wanted him to remember too... Chh
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Reviewed By: chibidi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2006 12:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was really good but it was just hard to believe that he sleep through the entire time.
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Reviewed By: i'll_never_tell On: December 30, 2005 00:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh... what? You have a lovely way with words, I'll give ya that much. But Sakura basically just raped Kakashi in his sleep and he, an experienced ninja, failed to awaken... Sorry, that's just off to say the least
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Reviewed By: cyzay [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 03:54 CST
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I was fully expecting Kakashi to wake up - I was nervous about that! It was a great story - the discriptions were beutiful, got the point across without being graphic - great style! as a one-shot everything worked well
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