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| "Half of Three" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: sglily [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2006 21:15 CST
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I just love your stories and the fact that two of the main characters happen to be Ryou and Bakura was another added bonus for me! I love the Seto Kaiba character in the anime - he's mean, vicious, domineering, brutal, yet loyal and more - but in yaoi situtations, I cringe... in most instances, that is. Pairing Kaiba up with Bakura (and ultimately Ryou) was quite a feat and you managed to pull it off well. Kaiba's character stayed true to form... cold and calculating, demanding. I really enjoyed how he approached Ryou at school and was so... businesslike when inquiring about the relationship Ryou and Bakura had. That was a great scene. Bakura's character is well-rounded. I loved Bakura's reactions to Kaiba's arrogance and assumptions. And, naturally, Bakura's relationship with Ryou is just juicy and loving, and... who can not love the opening sex scene between these two? Even though Bakura has this "thing" for Kaiba, he is still concerned about and thinking about Ryou. Although I am not big on Bakura and/or Ryou sharing each other with others, your stories are just well written because you take the time to hammer home the point that there is a solid relationship between the two to begin with and there is a reason for adding another into the mix - whether because of a secret fantasy or what have you. The key to it all is that grounding relationship. It's just a pleasure to read your works. As far as Ryou is concerned, he didn't seemed phased by Bakura's fascination with Kaiba but was surely reaping the benefits with more (both in quantity and quality!) sex. I hope that you find inspiration for another chapter in the near future!
| Reviewed By: Vamp468 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 14:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahahaha! I can't wait for more... There will be more right?
| Reviewed By: animechick1791 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2005 10:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this fanfiction, but there's one little problem. How do i get to the other pages?? Please...help me out. I can't seem to find out how to go onto the next page!
| Reviewed By: Aislynn Goldleaf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 09:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh...hot...iyoiyo onegai shimasu! (More and more please!) ::said on knees and begging::
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