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| "None the Wiser" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: skitty On: March 30, 2006 13:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally understand about school, but if you don't continue I'll be severly pissed. Poor Naruto... and will you explain the Ghosts and what Kyuubi did already, you're driving me nuts here! :p
| Reviewed By: Yui_alexandra On: March 28, 2006 15:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
New reader \O/, and I think I'll be reading all of those 30 + chapters you have promised to write. Even if I might not give you a reply in the future, I'll read your story, it's just that most of the time I'm a silent reader. But I thought since this story was as special as it is, it desirved more review that what it already have, so here I'm leaving you a little reply. I like you story, it's orginal, I read a LOT of fanfiction, and for the time being mostly Naruto/Sasuke fiction. Even if I read a lot of stories about characters during high school, this is the first time I have read about one of them beeing older than the other. For my personal oppinion I think Sasuke should be a little older than 14 if Naruto is 24. It's not that I mind 10 years in differense, but he is underage, it just felt a little strange. But on the other hand, I do not have the right to complain, when I was 14 I did not have any problems crushing my teacher, and he was 26! The style your writing in sometimes leaves me a little comfused, just as the part where Sasuke did not meet in class, then the next part he was there (was it lather that day?) and why was he soaking wet? The way you only use Narutos point of view is a little spesial when if comes to fiction, usually I would had liked if more if we (the readers) could see things from Sasukes point of view too, but in this story you build up the climax by only using Naruto. Uniqe. Since we can only feel what Naruto feels I just got to say that "I feel soooo sorry for you!!!" and what the hell happende to him, who left those scars? tell me and I'll deal with them, hmm or maybe Sasuke should deal with them... Even if Narut thinks at the moment that Sasuke is playing with him, I do not think this is the case, "love is in the air, everywhere you look around"...hopefully. When if comes to the dialect you use when Naruto is talking to somebody, or writing on the net, I'll give you a big pluss. Since I personally do not speak english as the first language I have some problems with some of the dialect words, but I manage most of them, and it's really creative. hope you will update soon (^_^)V ps, just got t say that I think this is the longes reply I have written in a loooong time... but this story desirved it. Keep up with the brilliant work.
| Reviewed By: the leviathan On: March 04, 2006 16:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. O______O I'm actually glad, now, that aff.n is down! I came here out of desperation to find good sasunaru fanfiction, and lo and behold, I found this fic. XD wonderful, darling. I'm very curious about how Kyuubi relates to all this (I've been wondering if he's some sort of alternate personality, or a separate entity of himself), and as much as I hate what Sasuke is doing to Naruto I still love him because he's...well...very Sasuke-ish. ^^;; I'm still hoping Sasuke will be the dominant one in sex, though...x.x
| Reviewed By: Asakawa Yuki On: February 15, 2006 07:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! It's been a long time since I've visited MM.org, and I had the best of luck! I found this fic! I actually wasn't totally sure about this at first, but then thought "what the heck" and read it. Now I'm reviewing, cause an author of a masterpiece like this needs reviews to know that their work is appreciated. Your writing style makes me have to use my brain so that I can read between the lines instead of just reading and going "that was so predictable". I hope you update as soon as possible, but I know life comes first. Go to school, to work, hangout with friends... all that stuff, because that way you can also get more ideas for future fan fics. But you knew that already... Didn't you? - Yuki-chan
| Reviewed By: the black rose ... offline On: February 10, 2006 07:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
TBR: *looks at gun in her hand* .... this is ment for someone else Naruto-sama. Sasuke: how come you never call me sama? TBR: you have enough groopies as it is, Sasuke-san. Beside, i usually call him Naru-chan!! NAruto: didn't i tell you to stop that shit!? UGH. TBR:great storie. I honestly couldn't see naruto as being anything but a stand up comic, let alone a teacher. Now that I've read this, though, I'm convinced he'd be a pretty cool teacher. That's not the point now is it?I love your fanfic. I hardly ever read something that isn't extreamly fucked with, so this is really refreshing. *deep breath* Ahhh. Smells like good writing. How old is kakashi by the way? I'm curious!
| Reviewed By: DBC13 On: January 07, 2006 19:13 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Great plot! I can't wait to find out more about what happened to Naruto! Update please!
| Reviewed By: Saphire Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 10:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay first review ^_^ So far the plot seems really interesting just making want to read more!! Please update as soon as you can so I can find out what happens!!!
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