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Reviewed By: flamesinger [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 14:00 CST
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Eep! Don't die on us now! Things are just getting started! You can't leave us hanging! It's not humane, I tell you! Cruel and unusual punishment for crimes we may or may not have committed! Please, please, please continue!
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Title: whoa...
Reviewed By: bloodkitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 16:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ack! ive reread this and reread this but it never ceases to amaze me how good it is!!!!holy f'en cows! c'est bon bien! elle est truley inteligent! ps- hurry and keep updating!!!!
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Reviewed By: Pilae Flamesinger On: March 21, 2007 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it so far. You really did make the wait worth it, and I can't wait for the next chapter. You've put this fic in my top ten favorites. Keep writing, 'cause you've most definitely got the talent to go far! Best of luck.
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 20:36 CDT
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Oh man, this is an awsome story!!! It's just on the borderline of untractable, but so full of excitement, and insanity...DOG!!! I love it...Please PLEASE tell me your gonna update again soon... PLEASE!!!!! I really want to know what happens next. ((And about the "dog" exclimation...I don't want to offend anyone by spelling it backwards... ^..^ That's why I use it. ^..^ )) Until you update....please let it be soon. Ja Ne, Zirra ^..^
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Reviewed By: natOfbar On: March 12, 2007 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I dont normally read AUs, but this is the BEST i've ever read, and i actually like it SO MUCH even though i had misgivings about the age gap between naruto and sasuke at first. I like the way naruto is all angsty in this one, most authors like to give him the "imastupidhappykid" feel, and completely forget his horrible past. ANYWAY, if you've watched Gravitation, i just thought that the Naruto here made a very good version of Yuki Eiri, right down to the messed-up past, twisted personality(sometimes), drugs,cigs, pills and blond hair. Oh yeah, and the fact that sasuke came to mess up his life even more by dragging up his past memories (especially those with GAARA, when i read that part i screamed and started fangirling like crazy)... so like shuichi. All in all i think your fic has this dark edge to it. Andisoloveit. The conversations between Zabuza and Naruto... ILOVE! Neji being awesomely hot... ILOVE! Sasuke being so tormenting, sadistic, evil, so NOT your typical student... *gasp* too good to be true. (tho there seems to be an improvement in their relationship now, judging by the last chapter.) I noticed that there was a very big gap between your last two chapters, and i really hope you'll continue to write this, its good stuff. please dont stop writing... or i'll go into withdrawal! XDXDXD
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Reviewed By: TheBlackRose(AGAIN OFFLINE!) On: March 05, 2007 12:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHH!!!!!!! *hugs Lamb-san* YOU UPDATED!!! SHOOOOO HAPPPYYYYY!!!! Sasuke: Where's the picture? me: What pic? sasuke: You forgot about the .... never mind, just forget I said anything. Me: OH YEAH!!!! I'm sorry.... we lost the scanner... "Lost" heh heh, "lost". I SWEAR YOU'LL GET IT AS SOON AS I GET A SCANNER!!!! ....and draw it up again (the last one was scribbled on by my little sister).Please update again soon!! And tell me what ya want for a picture... so I'm not pulling out my hair again. :)
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Reviewed By: may10baby [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2007 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon please!!!!! i wanna know what happens!!!!!!
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Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: TheBlackRose [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2006 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU!!! YOU HAVEN'T UPDATED IN A LONG ASS TIME!!! PLEASE DO SO SOON!!! i'VE BEEN WAITING FOR EVERRRRRRRRR!!! And I'm pretty sure the others are tired of waiting too. PLEASE UPDATE!!! .... Or else I'll make Naruto eat raw asparagus. Naruto: O.O ... UPDATE, PLEASE!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Uncensored On: September 03, 2006 05:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how this is going so far. I have no idea where you could get the idea for this. I'm jealous. Please please please don't stop this fic. It has so much potential. I hate finding good fics only to discover they've been discontinued. You are such a great author, and this story is simply incredible, it would be a sin if you were to end it.
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Reviewed By: lonelylulaby On: June 30, 2006 01:16 CDT
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i just wanna say hi and that i'm new to your story but i really enjoy it. your style of writing is kewl. it's very interesting to read, I can't wait till i find out more about naruto's and yohko's past it seems really horible. Then thos happens...to put it lightly THE SUSPENCE IS KILLING ME!!!!! keep up the good work and i cant wait till you up date again. ja ne till next time p.s cant wait till you start asking for fanart
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Reviewed By: anaki of the blood wolves (nli) On: May 15, 2006 19:46 CDT
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really awesome! i love how you describe everything so fluently! update soon!
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Title: Oh. My. GOD.
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar (nli) On: May 15, 2006 00:50 CDT
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This is just so complex and intense, my mind has been blown. You have officially put me in a state of rattled awe, and needless to say I'll be waiting with held breath until the next update....
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Reviewed By: Ceer Uchiwa [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 11:09 CDT
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This is a awsome fic and never before have i read ANYTHING even closely related to this! You are completly original and I greatly admire that! Please continue your work so i can write more reviews, ne?
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Title: WOW!!!!!! 0.0
Reviewed By: Koi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2006 02:06 CDT
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Wow you really know how to write an interesting story!!!!! I love it so far!!! Poor little Naru-kun!!!! I love how you have also made Sasuke one of the protagonists. This is a really interesting twist to an alternate universe plot. BUT, i dont like how you have Naru-kun antagoizing himself, but i guess that is what adds to the story. Oh well..... I give you two thumbs up for your story!!! *flashes peace sign in a true anime goofball style* Sincerely, Koi-chan!!!! 0_-
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Reviewed By: DarkDemon53 (wsi) On: April 09, 2006 16:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very captivating story! Keep up the great work.
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