| "Rage, Love, and an Honest Proposal" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: xFinalActsGirlx On: February 23, 2012 22:52 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
T_T that was such torture! I was soooo sad for those certain chapters, but chapter 13 made everything better! It's been so many years since the last update and I just started and finished this yesterday. I really do hope you write again, but since it's been so many years I can understand if you don't. I can just pretend the last chapter is the ending. ^_^ You're really good I hope you write more, I'll gladly read it. |
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2008 15:42 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! It's been so long since U've updated, I almost 4got about this story! Great chapter! B reading U!
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Reviewed By: abydos [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2008 07:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:)) loved it! thanks for the update.. i had to read the whole thing all over again just to remember the plot.. great fic! hope you are ok or at least getting there :)
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Reviewed By: dela1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2008 00:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING i LOVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVED THE SMEX PLZ UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: dela1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2008 20:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER CHAP.PLZ.
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Reviewed By: MiyaviFreak On: April 16, 2007 21:32 EDT
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YAY!!! ^_^ lol i love the fic and i am hopeing for a yummy lemon ^_^ hehe those are fun...espically when Yuuri is seme and Wolfram is Uke haha ^_^ it's sad that Wolfram lost his memories but i hope he remembers soon ^_^ hehe and i hope you update soon. Ja ne ^_^
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Reviewed By: abydos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2007 17:47 EST
Comment/Review:
yey! finally an update and i like where this is going.. pls update again soon!
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Reviewed By: MH On: February 16, 2007 16:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the style and the idea itself, and I had fun reading this although you really, really need to have a beta read it over before posting. It is filled with grammar and spelling mistakes, it might not confuse the reader since they are obvious silly ones but it does take some of the enjoyment and fluidity of the reading. Don't stop writing. Practice will help you avoid these is the future, believe me, I know.
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Reviewed By: Abydos On: January 29, 2007 18:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just loved your fic... it does seem like you've abandoned it though.. won't you pls continue i very much would like to see what happens next. :) plsssssssssssssss
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Reviewed By: Coco-chan On: August 01, 2006 19:17 EDT
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... ... What a way to end a CHAPTER! OH NOOO!!
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Title: GREAT!!
Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2006 06:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it and I hope you keep going because I gotta hear the rest of it especially after hearing how the last chapter ended lol. Can't wait!
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Title: Cute! ^^
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 02:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
That last chapter was just wonderful! I liked how Yuuri's jealousy brought out the Maou and how the Maou had the hots for Wolfram as well. That was very creative. I also loved the possessiveness of both Yuuri and the Maou. More description couldn't hurt but I must say there was still a good level of description in your chapters. The only thing that really sufferred was spelling and grammar, but I'm sure you already knew that. ^^ Overall, it was a nice read. I hope to read your next chapter asap! ;)
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Reviewed By: faithy On: July 16, 2006 23:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have to update this fic soon! its great i just want to know what happens next.. ^-^
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Reviewed By: Ruby_dream On: April 29, 2006 13:04 EDT
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Wow! It's a nice opening! and yeah, Yuuri once again makes me want to kick him :P I love Gwendal and Gunter's private moment~ Haha~ Even Gwendal can slip with his emotion, na? :D
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Title: Oh Please Update!
Reviewed By: Hikari_Girl4 On: March 20, 2006 23:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god! I love this fic! You are my idle, I love this and you are an awsome writer! Oh please update soon! It just kiss me to see an excelant story just stop like that! PLEASE UPDARE!!!! I'M BEGING!!!! Well, I'll be waiting for the next chapter. Hope to see you then. ^_^
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