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Reviewed By: Ryeka [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2009 19:30 CST
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dear god this is creepy, i just stumbled upon you, i think i might have read some other ffs of yours but that poem reaaaly was weird like really demented lol makes me sad that you quit 07? im curious to know if you'll ever continue? uhm if you could email me back? mmm my email is littleayeka (at) hotmail . com idk if you can do the stuff here or not uhm yeah but im sure youcan understand ? lol remove the space and () and add the at symbol thing whatever its called.
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Title: Amanda
Reviewed By: White_Witch_Sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2008 20:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a genius, this is a great peace of work. If you don't mind me asking, where did you get the idea? I the hush a by song, where did you get the lyrics. WOW you have some major talent. Real major talent, don't let it go to waste. email me: amanda420(at)sbcglobal(dot)net
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Reviewed By: Rose Fury(Man, I'm such a lazy ass.) On: May 07, 2007 15:03 CDT
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Damn that girl is creepy! Creepy, creepy, creepy! *snuggles with Trowa* Poor ickle Trowa, having to watch his dad die. *pets* So Nita-sama, when's the due date? Make sure and let me know so I can cheer you on and be with you in spirit!
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Reviewed By: camillian On: May 04, 2007 05:33 CDT
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the description of the girl still sent a chill up my spine! i do hope to see an update in the near future....Please :)
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 03:39 CDT
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Nice chapter! I got my blood and gore for the night! BTW congratulations! Do you know what the baby is going to be yet?! Well I hope you are both all right and that you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2006 15:25 CST
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I refuse to particiapet in this chain letter mess. I've not sent on a whole crapload of chain letters and nothing has happened to me. So there. By the way, I'm feeling much better now. ^^
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2006 07:46 CST
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Loved the chap! The poem thingy was sad but I do not buy into chain letters and will take my chances with the chick on the ceiling lol! She can't possibly be worse than a three year old bouncing on you in the morning! Lol hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 14:10 CST
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Man Nita, I feel like shit...I need a bishie-hug! *sniffles* Anyway, I m astounded by how innocent and caring Duo and Heero have both been to little Ms. Creepy. I can't say it would've been the same with me when I was that age. 0 Like that Nita? Just this big creepy white zero? Weird....
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 05:44 CST
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Damn this shit is so creepy I can't stop reading. Lol I love horror and this story has got me intranced. I just want to say the girl is creeping me out and that this is a damn good story! Keep up the great work and update soon! Now I have to find something a little normal so that I can go to sleep LMAO!
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Reviewed By: camillian On: November 05, 2006 19:58 CST
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you strike fear into my heart with everything that's happening to people involved with the incident on mars. where's une? why doesn't the little girl haunt duo? please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2006 19:42 CST
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Wellp, I've got an inklink! I've found that scary movies scare the crap out of me, but I can't get enough of the gore in your stories! Weird huh?
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Reviewed By: Scarletty-chan On: November 05, 2006 10:35 CST
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Hey, Whoo very nice, or rather very gory, sadistic and not so nice. But very enjoyable ^ ^. Poor Une and Doro hee hee well at least they went out in style. *yuck* I think I am very glad you haven't made this into a film cause I woulda puked, or just died from fright. Nicely done though can't wait for more luv and licks xxxx
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Reviewed By: camillian On: October 20, 2006 20:06 CDT
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this has to be one of the scariest and most disturbing fic i've ever read in gw, but i really like it and i hope to see you update it again soon. the concept itself has me hooked.
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Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2006 13:45 CDT
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Wow, this is the first time anyone has ever reached out to the girl. Heero is sooooo adorable! I'd huggle him but he'd hurt me. ^^ So yeah, I"m not gonna. I bet you that Hero will have learned Englih in no time! After all the beautiful cobalt-eyed soldier{I think I felt poetic. O.o} is practically a prodigy.
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Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2006 16:24 CDT
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Well....that was slightly disturbing at the end bit there....but deserved it that bastard!!! Anyway, you start out with this freakishly weird and yet satisfyingly creepy chapter and then end it with a little white dog and a water bowl!!! I laughed, alot. It totally killed the atmosphere, though. But that's okay, the atmosphere was kinda creepy.
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Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 17:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sheesh. This story is sooo messed up....It's hella interesting though. Please continue it? ^_^
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Reviewed By: Escapee On: March 10, 2006 13:30 CST
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Very interesting story. I hope Duo apologises to Solo, because the poor dog did need to be put out of its misery. I assume that Duo is going to end up on the streets with him some how. Also did Duo and his mother leave before they got the box. The ghost out a lot of effort in making sure the locket got back. I'm not sure what she'd do if it wasn't returned. Though the when she talks to Une she sounds like a man, so maybe Duo's father had control of her. However the way she was saying Duo's name, made it seemed that she was just repeating a sound that she heard. I wonder why psycho ghost is so interested in Duo. I think Duo looking like his father may cause problems with the ghost. Hope that Une didn't shoot the next kid she say. Though she proably felt better in the morning. I bet she and Dorothy just wrote it off to stress. The blood on the box and the necklace might be hard to explain however. Also poor Heero, to loose both parents. How is Trowa going to get his name in this? Anyway, can't wait to see what happens when they manage to get back to where the mess happened.
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Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 05:17 CST
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But I like it scary! For some reason I can barely handle scary movies but your stories don't really effect me like they do. THey just kinda make me satre slack-jawed at the sreen. *grins*
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Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 20:17 CST
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Yup, it's kind of weird how he's always so perfectly stoic...good thing Duo is here to break the silence by making him scream....*wink*
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2006 14:32 CST
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yo nita-chan! I can play your wonderful lulabye on my viola... when I figure out how to put it on my computer, I'll send you the file... I'm so proud of myself!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Jb On: January 31, 2006 19:24 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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This is eerie and spooky and intriguing! I'm looking forward to seeing where you take it. And yeh, it's probably time to move on from the Une torment LOL I like the horror aspect with the creepy little girl ghost ala The Ring. And her unhealthy fascination with Du-o has got me worried for our favorite braided baka.
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Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 16:03 CST
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Oh, poor Heero. *huggles him* He'll be okay though, he always is...
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Reviewed By: Codan On: January 29, 2006 14:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this, really intersting and original! But just out of curiosity how is it going to be 1x2 and 3x4 if trowa and duo are dead unless...no ewwww-urgh, yuck! Please tell me they're still alive!
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Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2006 16:29 CST
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It is a very good thing.^^ You deleted them? Darn, I liked reading what was there of those fics. Oh well, I'll just read the stories you have left again.^^
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Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 14:14 CST
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Well, I read this. Sat still staring in shock at the screen for a few seconds. Then I just burst out, "Cool!" That is the first story that's made me do that Nita, awesome!
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