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| "Bleeding Through" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Kazunomiya [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 02:50 CDT
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What can I say? I'm amazed - again. This story is probably my favourite out of the three that you have written. Why? Because my mother had fallen when she was pregnant two years ago, and I remember the look on her face when she was told that she had lost the baby. Both of my parents took it hard, and there really wasn't much that I could do. So yes, I can connect with this story quite well because of what had happened. You grammar, spelling, and puncuation are perfect, your story doesn't drag on and on - but it gets to the point while you explain everything in excellent detail. "Well done" just isn't enough. "Wonderfully written" just isn't enough. This sums it all up: You've blown me away with this story! I suggest that you continue on writing original pieces. You're very talented. - Kazunomiya
| Title: Congrats!!!
Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 12:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a powerful fic, and congratulations on winning Best Drama in the Maximum Challange Contest here!!! And out of 58 entries!! Congrats again, and I'm looking forward to more of your work (and the next chapter of A Journey To The City of Endless Night).
| Reviewed By: Delcamp On: February 05, 2006 13:24 CST
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(wipes tears from my eyes) I love this one. It's so sad, but at the same time, hopeful at the end. You write very well, both with this and in your other, longer fic, Journey...
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