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Reviewed By: vampslyr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2006 18:40 CST
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I think what you meant was his incorporeal form. A corporeal form is a physical body, while incorporeal is ethereal or without substance. Otherwise, kind of cute, I'd like to see it a little longer with more description of the reactions of the people around Ryou as he's talking to himself. And which language is he talking to himself in?

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