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| "Candy Sex" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: hullabalu On: November 03, 2007 00:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You get a 10 for creativity because of all the positions and meanings behind the candy hearts which, no offense meant, would probably be impossible for someone in their right mind to come up with. All that said, it was very hot and very, very smutty. :P Good work. Try posting your fic at AFF; it'll be well-receivied, I think.
| Reviewed By: Arenja [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 00:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my, b\why did i read this fanfic in the first place? It's even too perverted for me, and thats saying a lot.
| Reviewed By: Ficfan3484 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 14:56 CST
Comment/Review:
Nyhaha, I like this story, those poor maids.
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