| "a forgotten love and a forgotten child" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2008 20:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I like the premise of your story although I do think that Inuyasha would have approached Kagome once his daughter was born. I think you have created an insurmountable problem with this chapter. Kagome and her family will never forgive Inuyasha for keeping Kaida from them for a year! No matter how forgiving a person mey be, keeping a mother's child from her is just unforgivable. You have Kagome not even considering giving Inuyasha the chance to explain about kidding Kikyo even after they'd been intimate. There's no way she will ever forgive him this. I also have trouble believing that Inuyasha would just allow Kiada to wandoer off...Inu are nothing if not protective of their own! I'm interested to see how the story progresses.
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Title: PLEASE UPDATE!!!!
Reviewed By: naomi_netsuna [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 15:51 CDT
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WOW! So you left us at a HUGE cliff hanger...PLEASE do not make something crazy like Kikyo taking in Kaida or something like that happen. and what happened to Inuyasha so that he can't take Kaida through the well and back to Kagome...this is really a heartbreaking story!
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2008 14:46 CST
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I hope Inu finds Kaida soon. *did I spell the name right? :S* But Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: LusterBlossom [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2008 00:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story...I think Kagome and Inuyasha should be tigether again they're soo cute ^^
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2008 18:19 CST
Comment/Review:
awwwwwww a wonderful update from a wonderful person
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2008 15:56 CST
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awesome update. It's been a while. I can't wait for the next one. I wonder...is Inu gonna check the well house? And go to the past? Maybe he isn't as dense as I thought he was. Lol. Keep up the good work, and keep the updates coming. Can't wait.
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 19:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked this chap!!! 'sniff sniff' but it's sad!!! well UPDATE SOON!!! I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENES NEXT!!!! U ROCK!!!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2007 07:38 CDT
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im so dippressed make them find the child!!!!!! :'( ahhhhhhhh im sad now but awesome story XD
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really am liking the story. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAP!!! WHAT SUSPENSE!! YOU'R THE BEST!
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Title: Great! :D
Reviewed By: The Midnight Priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 16:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome job, I love this story! I liked this line lol: "She looks more like Inuyasha trying to get out of a bath" I can't wait to see what happens next, so please update when you have the chance! ^_^
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 03:51 CDT
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i love your work but it can be hard to read once and a while because of misspellings but if you put your heart to it i bet you can do it. keep up the excelent work and im really really looking forword to the chapters that lay ahead.
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 07:58 CDT
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Woohooo! A New chapter! Woot! I hope Kagome goes through the well and she and Inuyasha are forced together again. Qoute quote, forced, end quote. Can't wait for more updates!
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Title: good
Reviewed By: meiscrazy4_Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 06:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is turning out to be a good story can't wait till the end
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Title: Good job! :D
Reviewed By: The Midnight Priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 14:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! This story is really creative, and i love reading it! I can't wait to see what happens to Kaida! Please update whenever u have time! ^_^
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Title: Great chaper! ^_^
Reviewed By: The Midnight Priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 23:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story! It is so original, and it is enjoyable to read! I especially loved this part lol: He wouldn't of gotten too far anyway...with that load he's carying -_- Great job, and keep up the good work! :D
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Reviewed By: kagome9854 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter.She gets to meet Shippo now! ^_^ Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 12:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
I review! i like this story, but Kaida is a little... scared for a hanyou. no ones gonna hurt her... i hope. she's in da feudal era! what happens? updates!
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Reviewed By: chiyosama808 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 14:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oi! I really like the emotion that you put into the story and the characters. Things sound good. I hope that things work themselves out in the end. Thank you!
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Reviewed By: Fanfactor [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2007 21:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the chaps were boring but the plot was good. I sorta had the same idea for my fanfic, A better Future? try to entice with some suspense
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Title: inyo
Reviewed By: inyo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 17:26 CST
Comment/Review:
plz update sooner i love your fic
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Title: inyo
Reviewed By: inyo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was awesome .plz update sooner cause i dont like waiting
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: The Midnight Priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a great story! It is really kawaii! ^_^ Plz write more asap!
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Reviewed By: Sacred Four Loves [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this story ~*~ Please write more, I really want to know how Kagome will react once she see Inuyasha again and how Kaida will react when she finds out that her best-friends, Inuyasha, is really her father!!!
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Reviewed By: kidloco [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 16:13 CST
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i love it ^^ sit millionj time XD that the most funny thing can happen there jajaja inuyasha sit XD i wait evrythign go well wiht kagome and inu and kaida ^^ si good ^^
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Reviewed By: princessAly2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 15:26 CST
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this story is great hope you continue it soon. Toodles ^_^
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Title: I'm Liking It...
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 04:59 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm in love with the latest chap but it made me mad when it ended the way it did... but I must learn to have more patience and trust that the next chapter would be just as good or better- poor yash, he has so much to do before gaining back Kagome's love, won't it be wrong if Kagome starts to go out with another guy while Yash is planning?- tee hee- evil thought- what would Yash do in the feudal era and how's he supposed to get to Kagome? Okay, shutting up- CAN"T WAIT FOR NEXT UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: xAznPurity [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2006 23:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter ^^ Inuyasha should confront kagz soon =D Kaida is sooooo cute! Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2006 23:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh I cant wait please update soon.
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Reviewed By: kidloco [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 00:58 CST
Comment/Review:
^^ thanks for the upsgrade ^^
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Reviewed By: kagome9854 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 23:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is really good! Plz continue soon!!!
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