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Reviewed By: inuyasha-coolness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2008 17:14 CDT
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this is a great story. i read it cuz im waiting for the violation of honour update. im happy i got a chance to read it cuz it was so good!
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Title: monk-miko
Reviewed By: Update On: September 12, 2007 21:49 CDT
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I have just been waiting for this new chapter forever. I keep looking at it to see if you have made a new chapter for it. I want to see what happens after the lemon. Which by the way is very good and I mean good. Just like all your other stories. Hope you're able to finish this story up cause just like all the others. Its just to good to just stop writing. I just think that all your stories have passion in them and make them come to life. That's what I love about your stories. Well just wanted to write in this one too cause this is also a good story. Hope to see a chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2007 17:30 CDT
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I love your stories!
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Title: :0(
Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 04:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I miss this story. It's been a while since I've seen it updated, but I can't really talk, lol. I know how it is. Here's to hoping you find the inspiration to finish this story! -Pita
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2007 15:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 18: I hope you update soon! Though, it's been about three months... Anyway! That was brilliant, though I skipped all the lemons. *blushes* Thanks for the lemon warnings, by the way!
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Reviewed By: ~*~UnOuLuVmE~*~ On: January 27, 2007 05:04 CST
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If you don't release the next chapter within the week, I will be forced to come after you and bind you to your desk chair until you do! The story is so amazing, and your writing style is so good. The story has kept me on edge since I started it, and I find I can't go without reading it for long periods of time. And these last two chapters were written so exquisitely and visually that I nearly had an orgasm myself! well, you know what I mean. Anyways, I am thoroughly addicted to this story, and NEEEED the next chapter ASAP!!!!
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 10:18 CST
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all I can say is "bow chica bow wow" excuse me while I go enjoy the afterglow now need a few more chapters of Violation of Honor.
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Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2007 23:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
... wow ... This was a great couple o' chapters! Well worth the wait! Whew! I'm still feelin' steamy! lol And boy was that little 'interruption' a shocker! I was like, NOOOOOOOO!!!! lmao Anywho, great writing. I can't wait for more! -Pita
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Reviewed By: DragongirlCV [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2007 22:41 CST
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Oh man! *fans myself* that was hot! OH and I love you!!!! not only did you add TWO new chapters, but you updated today! (Todays my 23 birthday!) YEAH!!! what a great present!!!!!! Thankyou for making my day a bit brighter!!!
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Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2007 16:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, those were some great chapters! Loved reading each and every line. Bravo, as always, on a job well done! ~Ang~
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Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 22:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My first time reviewing, since I just recently stumbled upon this story, via RhiannonoftheMoon. I just wanted to tell you that the originality of this story was great, and I ESPECIALLY love the twist of Kagome's immortality. Everyone else tries to make her immortal through the 'mating', but I think thats a ridiculous idea. The idea of Kagome, and ONLY Kagome becoming immortal because of the Shikon Jewel... genius. I also liked how these two didn't feel like they were rushed into being a couple. Yeah, it happened fast. But it seemed natural, and that's good enough for me! Sorry for the amazingly long post - I just had to tell you how much I enjoyed this story. As you said, I am now awaiting the best part.... Citrus, AHOY!
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Title: Ch. 16
Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2006 20:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Completely and totally AWESOME! This chapter simply rocked! Awesome job on the battle and I loved the descriptions and everything. Loved it, LOVED IT! Congrats on the nephew. :D He sounds like he's a cutie!
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Reviewed By: Cochrann [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2006 11:58 CST
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I love the way you write!!
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: December 08, 2006 06:56 CST
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First off congratulations on the little nephew! Second the battle scene was delicious fantastic! oO i loved it and Juria being trapped in the mirror...we'll i wouldn't want to be her but she derves it! and kagome was hilarious when she saw sess in that coat..oh yeah who wouldn't go crazy? lol can't wait for the next chapter and i'll be waiting patiently as always. ^^
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Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2006 01:49 CST
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It was a very good battle scene. I don't know how anyone can write those, they are so complex. You had a lot going on in this one and you kept your focus. I could visualize what was happening and often when a battle scene is written it is too hard to follow because it's easy for an author to get confused and muddle up the description. I enjoyed reading this. I was so surprised to see Kanna. I had forgotten all about her and one of my favourite parts of the story was her house. Go figure.
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