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| "Overboard" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] | Reviewed By: Monts On: January 18, 2008 04:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is actually like my favourite fanfic of all time, of any fandom out there :P I've read it more than a few times now, and enjoy it every time I do. The characters are fantastic (the boys are absolutely adorable), and I think the way you have adapted the story from the film and changed it fitted so well. It made me want to go and watch the movie, and then it wasn't as good as I expected :P So thankyou so much for such a fantastic story, it really is superb :D Monty
| Reviewed By: catch-katch [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 04:00 CDT
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i've already reviewed this story, i know, but that was a long time ago, and looking at the record, there's only been a relative handful of reviews! you deserve more! plus, i'm currently re-reading this, and am doubly entertained and impressed, so you get double reviews. ta-da! (you should write more!) over and out.
| Reviewed By: evalhanne [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2006 21:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely awesome. If I didn't have other stuff I was required to do, I would've stayed glued to my computer. I like the way you made all the characters seem 3D, it really pulled me into the story. I nearly cried when Heero was falling to pieces.
| Reviewed By: catch-katch [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2006 07:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really, really liked this one. one of the best fics i've read in AGES. it even had a good ending. i hate it when you get this really awesome fic and it's got heaps of potential and then it just... ends up... crap. this one's ending was great! um... yeah! what did i like about it? oh, the language in some places was really well developed and from a purely technical englishy side of things i liked those moments where the setting was described like the ocean, e.g. the crowds 'washing' and stuff. very well done. also, the really cute, random tidbits that make you feel all warm and fuzzy inside like that breif, haphazarded mention of the 'mari was here' written on joe's hand that he refused to wash off, and the 'H n D 4 eva' stitching on heero's pants. so, so cute. the setting of the house and the town was well developed too, you could get a real sense of the place. one of the downers of a lot of fics is that people naturally indulge their imaginations and think up some place really huge and extravegant - here, you used a small sea-side town beautifully. the kids were done really well too. the whole family of the boys, heero and duo was so well done and cute and lovable ^^. i saved several really cute lines for my msn names, lol, they were so adorable. all in all this was really really excellent and very satisfying. one of the few fics i would save and re-read later. i've read probably hundreds of fanfics over the years (wow, i really sound like a loser _>), and there have only been about 40 i can bring to mind that i have considered notable and genuinely enjoyed. you're would probably be in the top 10 of these. you should definately right some more fics, awesome, big, long ones like this one - i would totally read them. i read that art class fic, it was good, but too short, and this one was far better. write another one like this one ^^. Any way, in conclusion - YOU AND 'OVERBOARD' ROCK MY SOCKS!!!! WHOOOO!!! YEAH!! *caff caff* ...yeah! _>.
| Title: Epilogue
Reviewed By: Pyrzm not signed in On: March 22, 2006 21:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW freakin' WOW! THat was so spectacularly good! I'm sitting here all teared up and fuzzy and heart warmed. Great, great job!
| Title: Ch. 10
Reviewed By: pyrzm not signed in On: March 22, 2006 20:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Agggghhhhh!!!!! You're killin' me! I can't stop reading. So good! On to next chapter.
| Title: Ch. 6
Reviewed By: pyrzm not signed in On: March 22, 2006 19:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow, this is really great! I've never seen the movie, but that's not a problem. In fact, I'm probably enjoying more, as an original. Really well writtten. Now I have to go read the rest! Great characters, and the kids are wonderful! Hope this has a happy ending, or I'm going to be really bummed.
| Reviewed By: mamajen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2006 16:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was awesome! You did an excellent of borrowing the idea from the movie, but definately made it your own. I also loved how you developed all the characters. I can't wait for another piece from you.
| Reviewed By: Tuatha On: March 04, 2006 16:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the very best fanfics I've ever read! It's clever, original, sweet and angsty. And the chapters are so fantastically long! I LOVED all the nephews. I know a family of five boys and it is so like that! Please please write more Gundam stories.
| Reviewed By: urshurak On: March 01, 2006 09:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, much better than the original!!!! I enjoyed reading this story very much!!!!!
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