| "Antagonists Unite" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 15:51 CDT
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Rin is so unlucky. I feel bad for her, honestly. But I suppose this will lead to better things... this is, after a story, which must have a lovely romantic ending, am I correct?
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 15:48 CDT
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Heh. Good. I like Eri and Yuka, even if they are a bit shallow. Good intentions, and all. I kinda like Kagura and kanna too though. It's not their fault Naraku is evil.
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 15:44 CDT
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I feel so bad for RIn. Sesshomarou probably will be no help at all.
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 15:42 CDT
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Hmmm... I'm much more special then your boyfriend could ever be.
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 15:28 CDT
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What purple button?
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Title: Yo!
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2006 16:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
X3 YEE! I'm so excited!!! It's been absolutely forever since I found a new fanfic to read and this one is uber uber uber fantastic! But I have to admit, the first person points of views, I had to get used to. But now I absolutely love it. I think it's my favorite point of view now! ok, blah blah blah. Im done blabbing now ^-^.... *five seconds of non-shrieking*.... KKYYEEE!!! ^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^. *big breath* -_-''' ok, now im done. hahaha; write more please! I love it!!
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Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 16:15 CDT
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update please! it getting good!
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Title: It's Awsome
Reviewed By: Tanaga Mannie_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 17:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more i really do like this story . and its just getting juicy man i can't wait to read more.I like the rin and sesshy situation. Bold
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Title: its kool
Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 16:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like ur writing and its a good fan fic to read and i like tear drops too. u dont have thatt many spelling mistakes either. so i'm happpy.
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Title: its me again :D
Reviewed By: LilSis [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story just gets better and better! the plot thickens... dun dun dun! a quality reveiw? ummm... well as far as i can see, there isnt much wrong as far as grammar and spelling, the sentences flow and are easy to read through. it keeps my attention and there arent any redundencies that i notice. somewhere you did write "hard" instead of "hair" which threw me for a sec, i think it was when you were describing kouga. other than that, there's really nothing wrong. a really good point is that you make a tangible break when you are switching pov's, it helps the reader to make the transition in their minds much easier. characters dont waiver from your chosen portrayal of them, which is actually harder to do than one might think, especially as they have and original personality in exsistance. all in all its a wonderful story and i look forward to your updates!
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Title: hello
Reviewed By: BloodRedMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2006 20:49 CDT
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Love how its going please update soon
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 12:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sessh to the rescue w00t! Nice how you gave someone for Sessh to be jealous of, and it's cool to see Kouga goin after someone other than Kagome. Good job, update sooon
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uber cute. I like this occ Sessh, he's cool. Cant wait for some Rin/Sesshy fluff, maybe some lemonade? (in later chapters of course) lol j/k. Nice job on the POV's. update soon ^.^
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Title: I like it :D
Reviewed By: LilSis [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 12:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a cute fic! I'm only a little dissapointed that you haven't updated in so long :( I wanna see how this ends!!! Rin's personality is such a change from how we see her in the anime/manga, since she isn't brimming with hyperactivity, but I sorta like her this way, I guess if she were to grow up in the manga, that she would be somewhat like the way you portray her. So keep up the good work I hope to see more soon :D
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Reviewed By: Rin125 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2006 04:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a good chapter!! Please update soon!!
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