| "Antagonists Unite" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: FIRE Tiger [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2009 22:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story. its funny,and realistic in its own way. please keep writing and update soon.
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Reviewed By: KittyXD [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 14:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love this story and really really really really really really really really really really really wish you would update PWEASE! I want to know what happens next in the story.
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2007 08:14 CST
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Glad to see another chapter up liked it.
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Reviewed By: Chaya_09 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 01:43 CST
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I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2007 21:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Totally awesome!!!! Keep the awesomeness up!!!
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 01:16 CDT
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You thought it was your best chapter, really?? I thought it was kind of half-assed, if you know what I mean. :/ I think some of your other chapters are better... I'm just like ":/ hm" right now so, :P, don't listen to me. X3 Anyways, I'm glad you updated. I hope I get to read the next one soon! Au revoir~
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Reviewed By: mikan sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 08:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is just great!!! I really can't wait for the following chapters!!! I'm so excited!!! Sesshoumaru is just sooo cute!!! He's surely my favorite!!! By the way, may I know what you mean when you said "island" in the fanfic Chapter 14? My imagination of the fanfic got lost there you see.. pretty weird huh? anyway, I hope you'll be able to finish the next chapter! I'll be waiting! I'll also be supporting you! Your fanfic, as of now, is my "rated one fanfic"! Good Luck!! Hope you get more reviews!!!
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Reviewed By: emeraldoni [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2007 19:56 CST
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I love your story and everything, I think the only problem is the tense change. But dont worry about it, its not too distracting and a lot of people have a problem with that. And despite it, the story is great, so I hope you update soon. Keep up the good work! ~emeraldoni
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 22:04 CST
Comment/Review:
WAAHH! GREAT CHAPTER! X3 eeeeee this is gonna be a great fic, i can just tell! ~_~
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Reviewed By: KittieCat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 16:27 CST
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Very well done story. Orignal, thoughful and well written. The way you're progressing the plot slowly and carefully is wonderful. You have a way with words. Normally I'm not into reading Sess/Rin but this one caught my attention and I've really enjoyed it. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: inukaggrrl06 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 23:05 CST
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So did, uhh. Sesshomarou come to Rin's window or the door? I can't wait for the next chapter, and I couldn't agree with you more, because the more reviews I get from my stories make me inspiried to continued to write the story. Again I love the conversations between you and Jonathen. Jonathen, I love your remarks. Between you and this story, it just keeps getting better and better. All I have to say is that Rin has him whipped and they aren't even a couple yet. Just like you, Angel, you have Jonathen wrapped around your pinkie. LOL. Well I'm going to have my Johnny Depp time, and watch Pirates of the Carribean. Happy writings and a merry muse.
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Reviewed By: KittieCat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 15:14 CST
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Must applaude you on the plot line. Rather orginal if I do say. You're writting is well done and thoughtful. It's a very good story I must say. Keep up the good work and please update soon.
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Reviewed By: inukaggrrl06 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 00:29 CST
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Really, where's that purple button? I can't see one anywhere. I hope that you don't wait too lon to update.
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Reviewed By: inukaggrrl06 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 00:27 CST
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I must say that I don't read that many stories focusing on Sesshomarou and Rin, but this really caught my eye, and I love how you characterized them. Which, I have to say I love how you protrayed Sesshy. I can't believe that I finished all of these chapters in a span of an hour. You really know how to capture your readers. And I must say that I enjoy the little pow-wow's between you and Jonathen. I think that's how you spell his name. But I want to know, are those acutal words spoken between the two of you. If it is, I enjoy Jonathen's comments. There absoultely funny. Well I need to go to bed, it's almost two in the morning where I live. Again, I can't wait for the next update.
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 16:13 CDT
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Sesshomarou's such an idiot.
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