| "My Life" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: Crazy Wicked Witch
Reviewed By: Crazy Wicked Witch [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 02:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey its so good! dont listen to the 'nobody now' the poem is very good and last para is awesome write more if you have any. thanks Crazy Wicked Witch
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Reviewed By: Nobodynow On: March 07, 2006 16:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eh, didn't inspire to much feeling. I like the beat of it but the words are iffy. They don't make you feel sorry for Kai they just seemed kinda 'whatever' to me. Like he's just feeling sorry for himself and blowing it up. The line about suicide is rather nice but it didn't have anything to back it up. Sure he's feeling down but what was the final straw? I hate to say it but it sounds kinda sixth grade. It doesn't have any life any reason for it to exist. Just like short thoughts, nothing deep nothing to make it stand out. Try to get more in the mood next time this time it didn't feel very composed. Thank You. DK ;)
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Reviewed By: RoronoaZolosGirl07 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2006 12:56 CST
Comment/Review:
I would like to thank everyone who read my poem.
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