| "Lost Souls Found" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2009 21:11 CDT
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Wow, quite beautiful... Why does this not have more hits? It's criminal! You really captured the sides of their characters we rarely get to see, and they are absolutely believable. This is one of the few fanfictions to make me cry from the sheer intensity of emotions! I'll be here if you decide to finish it! =)
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Title: beautiful
Reviewed By: nekonyago [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2007 00:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a beautiful story. So original in that it addresses the challenges they will face being from different worlds and times. It is nice that Kagome isnt just gonna give up and stay in his time. I am so sorry to see you havent finished it and arent sure when if ever you will. I am going to bookmark it just in case you get hit with the idea for the ending. I really love your fic's they always leave me wanting more. And a cold shower. hehehe
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Title: "Good-Byes"
Reviewed By: QueenTatooine [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 09:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very good chapter, and a very good start on the story so far. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next. Good luck with the next chapter
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Reviewed By: dreaming_trees On: August 13, 2006 20:30 CDT
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This is a great story, Fano! Well-plotted, very descriptive, and has some intense moments of internal and external conflict. Really like what you've done with Kikyou (she seems more chilling than tragic) and am wondering (along with everyone else) if old Naraku's really dead or just playing possum! You MUST finish this!!!
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Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this. I was a little confused in the beginning, but I've only just started reading the manga and that might be why. I'm glad to see you have so much more here to read. You're very good at expressing InuYasha's conflicting feelings about Kagome. He is so afraid of hurting her by getting close he hurts her by backing off. I felt for both of them. I hope you choose to continue this at some later date. It's very nice and could go in so many directions from this point.
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Title: Life got you by the...
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 21:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
been a while sense the last update here or at the ff.net site so I hope that life and other isperations haven't pushed this story out of you mind. I like it very much yet one more dimond in the ruff. I love the real feel that I get from reading it. And the way the end isn't istantanious *or however that's spelled*. The manga just got really jucie so if your a member of the advanced Inuyasha yahoo group you might find some insperation there because to me you story feels like that manga. Well you on my fav's list here so if you update I'll be back.
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Reviewed By: nokomarie the Snake On: April 23, 2006 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quite good. I think you'll find the story will take care of itself. About your question; the string you mention is actually connected to the back neck and right side of his collar and is used to tighten the neck of his suikan closed. The way he wears it he is tying it open by looping the sring from his back neck down behind and up under his armpit to meet the one in front. Sort of a casual style.
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Title: great story
Reviewed By: freakyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story can't wait for u to update..! great joy.. i love the way u write ..
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Reviewed By: theamazingd001 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2006 07:32 CST
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YESS!!! You are my HERO! I have read so much fan-fiction even stuff that has been put out very recently like this and noone has ever mentioned the new Tensega. Eventhough its the most powerful sword that exists. Oh well im still looking forward to this story more haha I actually did a chapter 6 review first but I just had to come back and say this.
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Reviewed By: theamazingd001 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2006 07:05 CST
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wow this story is really good! sry I havnt reviewed it before but I just started reading. It looks like your update well too which is awesome, I hate waiting forever for chapters. LOl i know that authors just want to make their stories great but lol I want to read them so I hate waiting a few weeks or a month to a time for new chapters. Well update soon if u can!
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Reviewed By: Pariah [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 12:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I am in love with this story. The depth and feeling you've given the characters, not to mention Inuyasha and Kagome's delicate situation, is haunting and -real-. I can't wait to see where you take this, and I'm excited for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Ashra Ab [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 11:52 CST
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Im really enjoying this story, pls update soon.
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Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2006 20:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, this is definitely different. Not too many stories out there that follow the Manga and are actually good. There's only one other one I know of. Im surprised and impressed. But I really like this. Makes me wonder if Naraku is really gone or not here, hm-mm...just have to wait and see I guess. Update when you can.
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2006 14:13 CST
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I'm really liking this story and how it isn't all cherriful after Naraku is destroyed. I have to say, if you are self betaing you are doing a fine job. I saw only one typo "he'd shown him the gifts" in "summer's End". I think it is supposed to be "she'd shown him the gifts".
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