| "The Lone Wolf" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: freelova [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2009 12:02 CST
Comment/Review:
rewrite
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Reviewed By: Alexis R. On: July 14, 2008 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This wasn't bad. But I really think you should just rewrite this. Get rid of the four exclamation points and question marks you had (previously) put. Sorry, but that somewhat annoyed me. Rewrite please! Oh, but...it was also kind of hard to understand.
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Reviewed By: Sonya112 On: July 03, 2008 11:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
I do hope that you re write this, i did like reading this, but it did need some tweaking. but im interested in see how this story would go. Please continue to write this. ^_^
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Reviewed By: eturnalsailorcosmos14 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 23:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAWWWWW!!! Its so cute! I love it...Mostly because I love wolves...I mean I even own a wolf hybrid...But I'm off subject....I think its really creative and original because I've read ALOT of fanfics and I have yet to come across one like this...All the romance fics for fb usaully envolve Yuki and Kyo dating Tohru and it gets really boring after awhile...Your spelling and grammer was flawless as far as I can tell...And I had a great time reading you story...You rule!!! Oh and sorry of a I sound over energetic...I have had ALOT of sugar today and very little sleep 'cause I've been working on all of my fics.
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Reviewed By: Sonyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2006 22:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there, I really like this story. it is diferent from others. please update soon. i would love to read more of this story. and also to see what happens next. so update soon. Ja-Ne =^_^=
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Reviewed By: wikkis On: May 25, 2006 17:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
it seems like you pretty much used the same idea as the other story "wolf" by kyo979876 i hate to chew you out but it just reminds me a lot like it.
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Reviewed By: Akahna On: April 05, 2006 17:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER ALREADY! This rocks.
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Reviewed By: SesshysMate [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 18:45 CST
Comment/Review:
wow this story is great please keep going i wanna see what happens. i wanna, i wanna, i wanna
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