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Reviewed By: Dalie On: July 31, 2006 15:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow! lovely! go Tseng! ^.^
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Reviewed By: cinnakat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 13:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Those names did seem familiar. Were they from Hana-Kimi? I have been reading that lately... though I'm only on book 6. But when I checked back I almost thought that I was going crazy because the chapter had been changed so fast. I'm already paranoid as it is. Well, thanks for correcting it so fast and keep up the great work!
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Title: ooops
Reviewed By: KIN [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 13:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
gomen nasai! yeah that was the wrong file ^ ^ ooops..... well here's the RIGHT file now heh
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Reviewed By: cinnakat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 13:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Um... is this part of the story? at least this last chapter... Um, who are these people? Ah, well. Maybe you made a mistake.
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Reviewed By: cinnakat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story and would appreciate it if you update. One thing, though. If you're basing this off of Before Crisis (with Tsengs hair and all) Elena wasn't there. The Turk that looks like Elena is actually her sister. Elena has long hair in FFVII: BC, so I guess she cut it after she joined the Turks.
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