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Reviewed By: Kougalover123 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 21:28 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was very steamy i absolutely loved. i hope you write more lemons like this. ;)
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Reviewed By: karenebl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 10:17 PDT
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Parts of this made me laugh out loud, which is good because I really needed that kind of laugh. It's also bad because I was around people to whom I could NOT explain. Then I had to hold my lower left eyelid because it kept twitching and the flashing light reflecting from the tears of laughter distracted me from reading. And no, I couldn't stop because Resmiranda wrote it, but at least I wasn't trying to read and drive this time. There was more than just ha-has as well. There's meat in the story. I am happy that Kagome and Sesshoumaru still have more to tell us.
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Title: I've wondered about his hair
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2006 22:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Another amazing tale; I really enjoyed it! Whether you write more for this story or not, I look forward to reading more of your work, though more in this vane may yield interesting results. Small note: "So beautiful, spread out beneath her, so strong and vulnerable - he seemed almost amazed, almost confused, his lips parted as he panted in time with her own gulps of air, and she could see the edges of his stripes on his face, on his wrists," - wrist(s) - I know it is minutia but you go to great lengths to include the fact that Sess only has the one arm... Oh, and I really like that the experience isn't just another good lay for Sess. ^_^ Well Done!
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Reviewed By: applesonawhim On: April 28, 2006 22:02 PDT
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oh sweet jesus that was hot.... you know how amazing your writing is so i don't have to say much else :P good luck in your future writing (in or outside of fandom, whichever makes you happier)!
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Reviewed By: 3Jane [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2006 10:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it - and actually feel somewhat happy now I know I'm not the only person to wonder how he shampoos his hair. Hee! Plus, Sesshoumaru wibbliness after sex, my God, add that to absofreakinglutelybeautifulsentence structure, and I fear I must be your slave for life. Comedy and smut? Like a creamy, nougaty center. Mm!
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Reviewed By: Nokomarie the Snake On: April 28, 2006 07:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent. Sigh, they are not my favotite pairing but well, I'll just have to tell myself she carries the day with inuyasha and they both get a happy surpise. But would it be as hot?
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2006 02:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fic. And I'm most jealous of Kagome! XD
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Reviewed By: its all good On: April 27, 2006 23:17 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that waz bang'n
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Reviewed By: InuSaga (NSI) On: April 27, 2006 20:09 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For a one shot PWP, Sess/Kag that was amazingly written. I thought it was very funny, and the lemon itself was incredible. If I have to complain about anything, it's that there were no serious reprisals for Kagome for having sex with Sesshomaru. I would be very interested in how InuYasha reacts when he finds out, but that comes down to plot, and if I don't like the plot then I should write my own damned story. ^_^ Well, good job and I really enjoed it. Good luck with your original work.
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Title: Tease
Reviewed By: Sesshyfan1121 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 18:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Res, you've done it again! Steamy smutty and fun....Wonderful :) Lucky Kagome....*sighs*
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Reviewed By: ManonLeChat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 18:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Wow* The sex scene between Kagome and Sesshoumaru was very erotic---and touching. An original encounter and beautifully executed. (Oh, and the as-per-usual-compliment to you for your graceful, gorgeous prose and pacing.) ;)
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Reviewed By: Firedemon86(nsi) On: April 27, 2006 17:37 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great! I have to say I'd like to see a Sess/Kag fic rise from this little story. I'd love to see what Sess's thought on that night are. So if you can find the time it'd be really great for this to be the start of a Sess/Kag fic. But awsome job your writing just blows my mind, you soo good. Hope to read more of your work soon!
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Reviewed By: Hiei and the Cherry On: April 27, 2006 17:13 PDT
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that was quite possibly THE BEST, no i take it back, it IS the best sess/kagome fic i've ever read!!! YOU ROCK! i love it! XD
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Title: Tease
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 16:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: lotus_faerie On: April 27, 2006 16:00 PDT
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Nice job. :) Oh, what would Kagome's mother say if she could see her now? ;)
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