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Reviewed By: Sesskag fan On: July 24, 2015 10:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this was great
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Reviewed By: Sesskag fan On: July 24, 2015 10:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this was great
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Reviewed By: squigglyprose On: July 24, 2010 12:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woof! comic, pwp-y, and skillful writing! ♥ it!
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Reviewed By: Lady Labrat On: September 04, 2009 01:35 PDT
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I love your story! Please write more good stories for fanfiction.net!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2009 17:23 PDT
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You know what I like about your lemons? They are very tactile without being smutty. How do you do that? I loved this piece the first time I read it and still do. ^_^
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Title: Unbelievable
Reviewed By: napris [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2009 18:13 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best lemon I've ever read. I don't know really how, exactly besides the obvious fact that this was written very well. Also, this is the best Sesshoumaru I've ever seen. This is the first time I've seen Sesshoumaru portrayed as a totally indifferent guy whose intentions are totally unclear but somehow totally mysterious, cool, and alluring. Ergh. I'm sure you know what I'm talking about. I can't explain it very well but you wrote his character, I love it and it's ... it's the best. Hands down. Anyways, as to why I liked the lemon a lot, maybe it's because it was quite different? I don't know know. The IDEA you used for spontaneous sex between Kagome and Sesshoumaru was weak, but that wasn't it. It was like the scene itself. It was really innovative, somehow. I think it's because of Sesshoumaru's new character. He's not 100% in control/dominant, and he's actually enjoying himself. Ahahaha. ^^ Anyways, GOOD JOB!!
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Reviewed By: dash-of-balder from deviantArt On: May 26, 2009 16:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've received this comment before, I'm sure, but I want to add my two cents. I don't like this pairing. I don't even particularly like this series. I'm all for canon couples, and when fanfic authors stray beyond that it BUGS ME. All that said, I LOVED this fic. You have written something kind of awesome: undeniably and without a doubt the absolute bar-none best sex scene I have ever read in my entire life (and I've read through quite a few, believe you me). This may be a bit specific, but I've always found that writing orgasms is a tricky and often poorly-executed art, but you nailed it - pun intended - with every little syllable you used. I loved that you used Kagome's internal monologue to convey the passion and intense pleasure she was feeling. Brilliant, brilliant, PERFECT smutfic-a wonderful mix of sweetness and sex, seriousness and humor (which you also did magnificently well). I just hope and pray that you write original fiction of your own one of these days. YOU WOULD ROCK IT SO HARD. I am not even kidding. GO FOR IT.
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 10:25 PST
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It was amazingly wonderful. Full support to the Sess/Kag-
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Title: HAHA!
Reviewed By: SilentQuill1 On: December 23, 2008 23:53 PST
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ok, so I JUST reviewed this, but I forgot to tell you: "dirty human hands are not fit to fondle this Sesshoumaru's glorious buttocks" That line, yah, that line had me laughing FOREVER. Just thought you should know. -SilentQuill1
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: SilentQuill1 On: December 23, 2008 23:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok wow. Holy....wow. That was amazing! I love your writing style! It is absolutely mesmerizing. And the lemon! I mean, usually lemons are short and crude. This one was amazingly written, not crude in the least, and never once made me lose interest. I compliment a thousand times over on your writing style and just on the story overall. I love it when people can write a GOOD Sesshomaru/Kagome story (there aren't many who can manage from what I've seen). Amazing work! -SilentQuill1
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Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 15:00 PDT
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Damn. That was great. OK. Please write a sequel where Kagome washes Inuyasha's hair with the special potion that Fluffy gave her. That would be a lot of fun to read...
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: junebug On: July 06, 2008 09:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are an incredble writer.This lemon has so much passion and is so intoxicating. Please keep writing,you are so fantastic at it.
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Reviewed By: Mrs. Squarepants On: March 19, 2008 11:20 PDT
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That was..wow. It was sweet and funny and blindingly sexy all at the same time. It made me laugh and squirm. A lot of people can't write lemons. It's almost like they're writing while getting off, which, understandably, can make for a quite crappy story. You, however, managed the smut by getting off because you wrote it, not writing it because you wanted to get off. And that is the proper way to write a lemon. Good work, babe!
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2008 20:15 PST
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I hate Sess/Kag. I hate hate hate hate hate it. But this I liked. I can't figure it out, but this is good. The concept was unique and the lemon was well-written. You should consider a follow-up where Kagome washes Inuyasha's hair.
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Reviewed By: Raye-Rei [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2007 12:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my. As always your writing is fantastic. It blew me away. Especially the drastic, but very much appreciated, mood change between the beginning's humor and the ending's--I don't even have a word to describe it--amazingness...? Just, WOW. My favorite part: "Don't say an arm." Had me laughing for a good minute. And the thought that if she said that and Sesshoumaru had heard... Well, hahaha, poor Kagome. Thanks for your wonderful writing!
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