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| "Wolves in Designer Clothing" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: Just a waste . . .
Reviewed By: maelia8 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 21:28 CDT
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This would be funny if it wasn't sooo OOC that it is just ridiculous. A little bit of clever character twisting can go a long way - so don't use too much and make the story stupid, rather than humorous. When characters do things they would never do in reality every single time possible, the fic becomes a boring out of character festival. A little bit of toning down would not go badly.
| Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 21:25 CDT
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"Naraku sucked!" --- That was the only thing that made sense in the whole chapter. Ewwww!!! Mrs. Higurashi??!?! In Kagome's thong?!?!?!?!
| Reviewed By: darkzonewitch [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 22:42 CDT
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dr.who and inuyasha two of my favorite things. You are a god.
| Reviewed By: demon overlord On: May 13, 2006 17:13 CDT
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good story update .so everyone is coming to her time narku and the bunch.is kagara and kanna coming to.who ,,,,,,,granpa and jaken nice.....
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