| "Baby Got Back (not a song fic)" Reviews/Comments [ 135 ] |
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Reviewed By: mysterious_demon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2007 07:30 EST
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NO NO NO NO . YOU MUST CONTINUE. I HAD IT ON MY FAVS FOR A WHILE AND I WANT IT TO CONTINUE
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Reviewed By: Beckie On: January 20, 2007 22:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this chapter! Something similar happened between my husband and I . He got so jealous of my reaction to what his hand was doing that he lost his erection. I really like how you have turned Sesshoumaru's boa into an OC!
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Reviewed By: Sidhe On: January 18, 2007 15:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, thank you, you goddessyou, for finishing one of my favorite stories!!! ::sighs blissfully:: if there was a higher rating for the enjoyment factor, i would have given it ::grins::
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Reviewed By: -Anita_Grace- On: January 17, 2007 20:33 EST
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What? Do youkai just really like fat girls? How interesting. I love this story. I love how Kagome thinks, she's handling this very realistically, as are Sango and Miroku. Love it. Absolutely adore it.
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Reviewed By: -Anita_Grace- On: January 17, 2007 20:28 EST
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A heh heh heh! Sesshoumaru grabbed Kagsy's ass! Yes! Best ever!
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Reviewed By: -Anita_Grace- On: January 17, 2007 20:24 EST
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I... What? She's, she has to be over two hundred pounds and Inuyasha thinks that's sexy? I mean, fifty pounds, yes. Sixty pounds, sure. Seventy... maybe. Eighty, eh. But more than that? I mean, how much was she supposed to weigh before that? I need to know, I need a picture in my head. I need height and I need weight - oh my god, a 40 inch bustline? Really? I just... oh wait. Never mind, I'm 34/36 so that's not too off, maybe it was the jump from 26 to forty, that's not very realistic. I mean, who has a 26 inch bustline? That's tiny. That's like, child size. I have a size two/four top and that's only one size up from supermodel thin, right? So, lordy. She'd have had to have been teeny. Seriously, I need to know her original height and weight. I do. It's killing me. I have to go now. I have to read on. (I love the premise of this story. Ingenious.)
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Title: THAT WAS
Reviewed By: JamminChick93613 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 17:25 EST
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AWESOME!!! I loved that thing were it went Kagome's eyebrow twitched, Sango's eyebrow twitched, Miroku groped Sango and soon joined the world of unconscious... I especially loved the Kagome's eyebrow twitched, Sango's eyebrow twitched,InuYasha's eyebrow twitched, and then everyone turned to Miroku and Sango said aren't u going to grope me? That was hilarious I almost fell out of my seat laughing. I can't wait to read more of ur stories!!
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Title: Thanks!!!
Reviewed By: szaugglaughs [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 19:42 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for this! I enjoyed it a lot. As a person who (I kid you not) injured my legs 2 years ago and gained a ton of weight in the year it took to recover, I possibly enjoyed it even more than normal. (Damn, where was Sessh when I needed him? I just went and spent the last year losing all the stupid weight. LOL) I found your approach to mokomoko-sama very creative and enjoyable, especially the little aspect of the end acting as a head...oh, didn't mean that particular pun, but it works, so I'll leave it, heh. Anyway, like I said, thanks so much for the story!!
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Reviewed By: Fub On: December 02, 2006 18:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe. I love you, your stories are SO AWESOME!!! I've read what you've written up to in The truth hurts (i came home everyday from school and checked for updates at least three times) and now that itz the holidays i'm reading this one. Lol, i love that whole Kagome's eyebrow twitched, Sango's..., miroku world of unconscious
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Reviewed By: amhor56 On: November 04, 2006 23:41 EST
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I loved that ending. Your story was great. I'm hoping that us, your fellow readers, get to read other works of yours.
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Reviewed By: soliary25 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 01:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Delicious!
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2006 18:17 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ lucky!I want fuck fluffy-sama!
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Title: Oops :D
Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead On: October 30, 2006 19:26 EST
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>_>; I can be found at xradioactive_redheadx on Yahoo messenger lolz @_@
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Reviewed By: RhiannonoftheMoon (nli) On: October 30, 2006 17:45 EST
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Love the ending! I'm partial to endings that don't wrap life up in tidy little packages - more often than not, the end of one story is the beginning of another. I thought this one was just beautiful. Looking forward to your next project!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 06:56 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it . :P
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