| "Baby Got Back (not a song fic)" Reviews/Comments [ 135 ] |
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Reviewed By: inukaglover815 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2012 21:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I love this story, and I think I have reviewed before since this isn't the first time I've read this, but I saw something and thought you might like to know. In chapter 18, you say that Sesshoumaru carried Kagome bridal style back to Kaede's village...yet he only has one arm... Anyways, it's not really that big of a deal, but I thought you might like to know. I'm gonna get back to the story now. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: nesque On: June 05, 2010 18:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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lol I remember this story! It was on Spark but got discontinued. Good stuff, though 100 pounds is a bit extreme and Kags is really kinda stupid. But its a very funny read XD
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Reviewed By: Danyealle-sama On: May 26, 2010 05:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! That was an amazing story that i giggled and grinned all the way through. It was most enjoyable!
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Reviewed By: tnew78 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2008 22:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really good story! I started reading it on ASS and got so pissed when I saw it was discontinued. And then so happy when I decided to check here and see if it was posted. Great writing and a unique idea!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 13:32 EDT
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AHHHHHHHHHH I READ THIS SO MANY TIMES AND I STILL LOVE IT !!!!!!!! XD XD XD XD XD XD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2008 17:26 EDT
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I LOVED IT!!! good story i loved it so much muahahahhahaha lol i loved it!!!!!!!!! gosh i need to stop saying I LOVED IT!!
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Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 01:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAH! I hate when people assume things. Is it so hard to just talk? >< And I hate that Sango and Miroku are so shallow and that Kagome has self-esteem and image issues (I'm not talking about just in this story. Most authors make her that for some reason). It's... disturbing. But you'd think she would have felt this way while she was recovering and doubled back. Apparently not. Bah... Well... despite my annoyances with the modern-temperament characterizations, this story is pretty good so far. I did have one question though. What was up with Sesshomaru's impromptu appearance? Random, no? ...Did he even leave? ._.;;;
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Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2008 23:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 1: Wow. I've heard of people gaining some weight when they'll injured, but 100 lbs?! Isn't that a bit... excessive for six months? I mean, yes she's laying in bed, but... That much weight, that quickly cannot be healthy (no matter how 'proportionate' she is). She's only what, 16? That's a lot of strain on her heart. >< I hope she doesn't keel over (especially being inactive for so long). Mou... Hoping this is more of a 'a healthy amount of meat on you bones is good - get into shape' story. *reads on* Oh, and I'm sorry (it's probably the sales associate in me), but they don't make size 26 bras; even for juniors. The have, fortunately, begun mass producing 28s though. Okay... I'm done.
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Title: umm... yea
Reviewed By: XxMimixX On: January 14, 2008 20:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was ... awesome and hilarious.
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Reviewed By: Katie h On: October 16, 2007 13:31 EDT
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Ok so... I read this, found it pretty funny. THEN last night im watching Inuyasha and its the ones where the ending is what i call the "sesshoumaru Song" Where he is looking at Ryukotse (sp?) and its all melencoly and junk... anyway the fluffy thing is like bollowing in the wind behind him... and i coudlnt stop giggling. THEN im reading the latest manga chapter and the last page is just a full shot of him ... again fluffy blowing in the breeze... and again i started laughing. you have officially killed all Sesshoumaru seriousness for me. But on a more serious note ... i avoided this story for awile because the name was kind of silly. finally i gave in and im glad i did. It was a cute bit of light reading ... too much angst makes me depressed... and it was very funny.
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Title: Baby Got Back
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 00:30 EDT
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Damn. This is fucking HOT. Wow. TEASE!!! Such a tease story ya know!
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Title: Oh My God (Becky)
Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 17:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Totally Love this to Death!!!!!
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Reviewed By: deviousauthoress1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2007 05:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it! Good job!
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Reviewed By: -Tsuki-Hime- [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 10:46 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOFL I haven't read it all I don't think I can get throught it all... It sooooooooooo funny! I mean...It makes since...as far as i've got I mean.. I just love it
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Title: Miroku grabbed Sango's ass and quickly joined the world of the unconscious.
Reviewed By: MistressKari [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 14:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG i love this fic, i may only be at chap 7 right now but i soo absolutely love it when you sneak it one of those 'and miroku quickly joined the world of the unconscious" i love it ^ ^
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