| "Against all odds" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Mar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2006 22:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ranma:WAAAAA!!!!! You hate me so much that I'm not even this chapter! You said you hate Akane and yet you had sex with her in this story. Even Mousse had sex with a pretty alien girl in the last chapter! That's it I'm ending my life right now! *takes out an grenade. pulls out the pin. swallows the grendade. gets blown up into little tiny pieces.*
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Reviewed By: Mar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have. I hope Mousse and Blackfire will live happily forever after. I hope they'll spend an eternity traveling across the universe. I hope they'll have beautiful and long-haired children that can fly and shoot lazers out of their eyes. I hope to see more Mousse/Blackfire sweet lemon sex scenes. And I hope Blackfire will be recording them so that she can send copies to that brat Shampoo and show what she gave up.
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Title: part 10
Reviewed By: capcomfreak4life [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 22:53 CDT
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cooooooool. you freaky demented little-- *rei runs past me in ecstasy probably looking for you* i love it! wonder what'll happen when happosai enters nerima and everyone who hates him to death finds out. i'm sure i can say that there's gonna be a rigteous amount of hell added to the stew that is the plot of this story next chap, i see. ...see you at the pizza parlor man! *leaves you to wonder what that meant*
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Reviewed By: Mar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 20:47 CDT
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Darn:-( I was really looking forward for a sexy Mousse/Blackfire sex scene. I was so excited only to be shot down. You are such a meanie tease. Good job by the way.
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Reviewed By: Mar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Goodie you got Mousse and Blackfire in the same scene^_^
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Reviewed By: capcomfreak4life [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 13:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
juicy as always. freshly squeezed and wrung out, sweet for the great moments (and but not only the sex scenes and related things), nice and sour for the action (however it can't rightly be called action), not to mention a little off... for your tendancy to invite raven in and let her run rampant like a cut yet miscrient lil puppy. ^^ anyway, aside from the moderate spelling and grammar issue it's all good.
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Title: returned on alert
Reviewed By: capcomfreak4life [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 22:03 CDT
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iiiiiiiiiiiiii'm baaaaaaaack. and i've missed ya XD love the story... but wait... the parts where you mentioned only getting about 10 years of education is true?! damn. i always hoped you'd be able to fix you tendancy to mispell and improperly phrase this and that. must get ranma episodes.
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Reviewed By: Mike Manazure [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
May your spelling improve (because it's really bad), may your Original Character not turn out a Marry Sue. May the force be with you, go on writing!
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Reviewed By: Mar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 17:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! One of your earlier stories^_^
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