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| "Wedding of the year" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: Athanar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job. I enjoyed this story, but I, too, am a TailsxCream person... but I used to support TailsxCosmo. They really were good together... until she died. Great job with the story, though, it was built with a solid storyline, clearly. You put a lot of thought into this.
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Reviewed By: Sayla On: June 14, 2007 07:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sequel please!
| Title: So-so
Reviewed By: SGI [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 04:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
well first off, you area good writer, but you could improve there is an EXCESSIVE amount of typos and grammar mistakes. in the begginning there were a few mistakes, but the ending was awful the story was good, except for one thing tails and cosmo?!?! im more of a tails and cream person XD but putting those matters aside the story was cute and had some humor in it, but one thing i dont understand how cj can just help like that? wouldnt there be some emotions there? PARAGRAPHS ill show you an example you dont have to talk like this "blablablabla" "blablablabla" you dont have to separate the speeches just because a different person talks. ill forgive you this one time, dont fail me with the next one =P why does amy say sonnikkku? i dont understand all in all, you did a great job, but i know you can do a lot better. cant wait to see honeymoon of the year (oh and one thing, try and add a little more bit of humor in it) thanks
| Title: k
Reviewed By: TheRealScootTh [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 13:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kool want ta hear from you about 'the honeymoon of the year' k k
| Reviewed By: ¢¾~Kategami_Suki~¢¾ On: November 27, 2006 20:30 CST
Comment/Review:
This is the cute story I had read so far.
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