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| "Kagome's Children" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: InusloverKag On: August 30, 2007 02:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool story.I want to know what happens so bad.
| Reviewed By: Satrika the Half Demon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 06:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER SSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!! .
| Reviewed By: Be-Jeweled On: June 01, 2006 13:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to agree. There is nothing to this story, in fact there is no story. This is just you trying to write fanfiction because you see all the other authors who've done it. You can't just jump on the band wagon here you have to actually know how and what you're writing. Your spelling and grammar needs some serious work. Take some creative writing classes. And here's a little writing rule, if the number is under 100 then you have to write it out in words. I don't feel anything for these characters and I don't believe this story. You have to make your readers care and believe that this story could happen. This rubbish makes me wonder if you've ever actually read a book in your life.
| Reviewed By: darkbunny On: May 31, 2006 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really to need to learn how to write. There is no sense to the story, is there an outline? There no purpose to characters, other than they come from Rumiko Takahashi creation. There no description, no detail, no background to the characters. You need to make these characters come alive, give them a purpose, give them a story. You need to rewire your story, or go back to your idea and make a better sense of it. Sorry if you're in mid-school, you'll get better with more practice.
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