Reviewed By: dar master of doom [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 09:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
so far it off to a good start but you need to staop using so many slang words. try useing real word that will make the story a lot better.
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