| "Fano's Fantasies" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: Perfect
Reviewed By: rr_chiba On: August 24, 2011 12:13 EDT
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I really think that that was one of the most beautiful and clarifying fanfictions I've ever read. Seriously, I think you described perfectly InuYasha feelings. He's a very deep and obscure character. It's impossible to know for sure what he's thinking of and you could do it so easily. I envy you. I felt it all. The doubt, the guilt, the relief, the pleasure. Perfect. |
Title: Entangled
Reviewed By: fireofinuyashas [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2006 22:44 EST
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I haven't wanted to cry so much since I watched Titanic- seriously. I have a tear in my eye. *sniffs* Well, it was certainly a plot that I've never read before, and you did make it realsitic in relating to the canon. My only regret is the fact that I am one of the 'faint of heart' that you spoke of in your endnote. I'm a sucker for a good ending.
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Reviewed By: HMPrune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 07:33 EST
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Lovely story. It's nice to see Miroku/Kagome friendship, and to show the power that they each have. (Of course, if you feel like 'expanding' on their friendship - that would be wonderful...)
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Title: chapter 3
Reviewed By: Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 02:50 EDT
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wow, that ending killed me! the "she almost reached back..." line was just so bittersweet. i love the image of inuyasha leaning into the well after kagome jumps, trying desperately to reach her yet knowing he never will. deep. very deep. you captured each character so well, i'm impressed. but that line when inuyasha and kouga are fighting about giving kagome to kouga after inuyasha gets what he wants! damn! that's cold. and the beauty that comes back to iunyasha's face when kagome heals him. i can almost see it in my mind. you capture kagome's first time down the well so clearly and in a new light. you're quite talented. i commend you.
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Title: Spiritual Ties
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2006 07:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its been a while sense I've been in a place where I can get to that state of mind, but I remember the feeling and I can say that I've had reather intense meditations. It was nice to read about this here. I think I'll go back to the beach this spring, the engery is cleansing down my the ocean.
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Title: Oops
Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 01:41 EDT
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Just wanted to correct something so others don'g get confused. In my previous review post I said that Spiritual Ties wasn't eligible for this quarter's IYFG awards but I was reading "Jul" as "Jun" when I said that. Dratted Dyslexia.
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Title: Spiritual Ties
Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 18:50 EDT
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Wow, I've been wanting more stories that show the deeper side of Miroku and you've written a great one. Your reasoning on what he would believe was well thought out and the use of the theories of spiritual energy well done. There is one typo, a missing space in "We all just need tocool down", but other than that it's flawless. I wish you'd posted it two days later so it would be eligible for the next IYFG awards.
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Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2006 08:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
These were all wonderful, but I loved the story of Rin. It read like an ancient legend or a Greek tragedy. I felt shock at the end and was reminded of the brutality of all the original fairytales. This was a deeply beautiful and affecting tale. It moved me and took a little piece out of my heart.
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Title: Absolutely sensational
Reviewed By: Aiko Fujiwara On: July 31, 2006 04:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm entirely impressed by this story. I'm not sure whether it's the content that you decided to broach, or if it was the writing style itself. You're simply amazing. Keep doing what you're doing, you're doing fanfiction a favor. =] Aiko Fujiwara
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Reviewed By: inu hanyou nikkie On: June 03, 2006 12:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
....blinks several times taking the story... WOOWWWW!!! That was awesome!! You have done it again Literary Goddess!! Created another breath-taking story. I was so impressed with the interaction from all the characters. The wide ranges of emotion and action!! Though I did laugh at Koga's description. Black head brown body. This was hot stuff!! Poor Kagome was confused then ticked off. I loved the line 'what is it with you guys kidnapping me..' lol. That was great! Though I was shocked with the comment Inuyasha made about giving Kagome to Koga. Then I smiled big time. I loved that surprise! You made such an awesome description of Kagome being pulled through the well and the action with Mistress Centipede. WOW!! That was cool. Sooo very descriptive. And Koga feeling her up for the jewel. Nikkie proceeds to cry with laughter! made a little typo with spelling of wolf in Japanese. it's written with two O's Ookami. You have kept the characters in perfect Takahashi-ness. Kudos!! You captured Inuyasha's scowl to a T. I also really enjoyed the fight sequence with Inuyasha and Koga that too was very well written. Yep! I figured that Koga would have some seriously nasty breath on him. I nearly killed myself falling off my chair with the part about bathing. 'What's a bath?' That I will remember for quite a while. ANd the comment about Kagome not having any jewels.. well my hentai mind took that in and I again nearly fell out of my chair with laughter.. after all don't guys have jewels? I love your work!! You such an awesome talent!! Please keep it up and I can't wait to see more!!
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