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| "Hanging By A Moment" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] | Reviewed By: Megan B Black [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 17:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a terrific fanfiction, and I'm thankful for this because this is the first fanfic that I've read in this fandom. ~winks~ I have read a GW fanfic with the same outline, though there are a lot of things that set yours and the GW fic apart. This kind of plot is used for many fanfictions, so I wouldn't really worry about it.
| Reviewed By: Shinegami-sam On: January 28, 2003 23:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Spelling mistakes...baka is baca, baca! :)
Also, you acknowledge midway through the fic that a physical relationship would be difficult for Hisoka after what he went through with Muraki, but then you go ahead and have the two have sex just minutes after their first kiss. But I guess yaoi is yaoi: plot? what plot? | Reviewed By: Requiem Duindain [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2002 23:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmmm, quite good. Yes, but I'm sorry it's not as original. Try harder but I do love the fic. So sweet. | Reviewed By: Amy the Yu On: October 02, 2002 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
SOOO CUTE!!! ^_^
I loved it. Sappy and cute. I thought it went a bit fast though. More descriptions could have been added to make the story's effect that much better, but good stuff nonetheless. ^_^ So much gooey goodness.
PEACE OUT =) | Reviewed By: gentle_yaoi_reader On: September 30, 2002 02:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This isn't bad, but it could be much better. The spelling mistakes and other screw-ups detracted from an otherwise nice idea and even though it was as cliched as cliched can get, I liked it. Please try to proofread your stories before uploading them and you might get more reviews since most people won't be honest with you the way that I will be. Oh, and another thing, try to put an original spin on things, won't you? Whoever told you this read like a GW fic was wrong, but it did read like a generic yaoi fanfic without many original ideas. | Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: September 25, 2002 04:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's good,.....i love the sex scenes,...very sweet and hot,...thuzuki and hisoka have always been my fav yaoi couple in YNM,...soo cute,...and looks good and yummy together,..*ssssiigghhh*....^_~.....
keep-up the good work,...till next time,..JAAAAAAAAA and GAAAANBBBATEEEE-NEEE!! | Reviewed By: Elf Asato [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2002 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it a lot ^^ Of course, I always LOVE Tsuzuki/Hisoka fics! Especially the ones where, besides Muraki, it's Hisoka's "first" time. Ah, very beautiful. |
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