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| "Hachinintai" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: shatter the sky comes quietly On: July 05, 2006 23:25 CDT
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Please, I don't care if you mispell everything else, but for the love of Heaven, it is CLOTHES, NOT CLOTHS!!! Cloths are pieces of fabric that have various uses. CLOTHES are what you wear!!! PLEASE fix this!!!
| Reviewed By: ky On: July 05, 2006 18:43 CDT
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awesome! a fic where kag is part of the shichinintai... which will actually have 8 people (hachinintai)... anywho, the only complaint I have is that kagome is a bit too calm about the whole thing... what kind of 10 year old would be fine after seeing an assasination/murder? Well, I want to read the next chapter so pls update ^.^
| Reviewed By: punjabi On: July 05, 2006 17:15 CDT
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it's band of 7... band of 7... band of 7
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