| "Hachinintai" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Title: PLZ!!!!
Reviewed By: HanyouGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 09:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!..you have got to finish this!!!!!!!!...It is absolutly awesome!...I can't get enough of it!!!...plz *begs on hands and knees*...finsih this story..I really want to see the next chapter too...it sounds really intresting!!!
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Reviewed By: phantomphan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 07:43 CST
Comment/Review:
can't wait till the next chapter comes out
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Reviewed By: yer lil demon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2007 17:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue!why did u stop?!?!u are doing awesome!^_^
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2007 16:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh comeonthis fic is not finished.
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Title: aww!
Reviewed By: mistress_yume [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 12:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is awesome! and its so cute too..his "inner kagome". XD ah..funny... =p
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Reviewed By: moosegirl13 (not logged in) On: July 15, 2006 22:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An excellent chapter as always! lol. You're doing a terrific job on this story... it's so interesting ^^. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 22:00 CDT
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Hey it was still cute without Kagome, I mean she wasn't there physically, but mentally...hahah. Can't wait for the next chapter, update soon please!
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Reviewed By: shatter the sky comes quietly On: July 12, 2006 19:15 CDT
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This is starting to shape up. Hate to be the spelling nazi again, but you need to be aware of homonyms. Those are words that sound the same but are spelled different. You confuse 'threw' and 'through' often. Threw is the action form of throw. 'You THREW the ball across the room' I know what through is, but not its definition. 'You thread a needle THROUGH the eye.' Keep going, all in all, this is pretty cool.
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Reviewed By: moosegirl13 (not logged in) On: July 12, 2006 10:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
W00t! Keep up the great work! ^^ Update soon! ~moosegirl13
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Reviewed By: Raina0624 On: July 10, 2006 13:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This one of the most Original Fan fics out there! please keep writting! you awsome at it!
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Reviewed By: shatter the sky comes quietly On: July 07, 2006 21:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, hobbies are NOT silly. They are things you enjoy doing. If you enjoy writing, who are we to tell you it's wrong? I don't think I've seen Kyou yet in the anime. Is he the big half-metal dude?
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 19:36 CDT
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Haha, this story is really funny and cute. I'm wondering...will they grow up? Or stay children, not that its a big problem...lol. Can't wait for more, update soon!
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Reviewed By: moosegirl13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 10:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The chapter was wicked awesome!!! It made me laugh when Kyoukotsu randomly ate the rabbit demon. So, the demons know that the jewel is in Kagome now... coolness ^^. I was kind of confused in Kagome's dream, but I figured it out. It's cute how everyone has grown attached to Kagome-chan. As far as I know, this story is very original. If I may, this fic would be even better if you have more description in it... just a thought. Anyhoo, keep it up! I look forward to the next chapter! ~moosegirl13
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Reviewed By: moosegirl13 (not logged in) On: July 06, 2006 23:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You're story is hilarious and so cute! Please, please update soon! I love it. Keep up the great work, peep!
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Reviewed By: GraveRose On: July 06, 2006 20:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's cool man. Love ur story.Hope you write more soon! :)
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