| "Hunter" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: Update plz!
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 01:47 CDT
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It's been bout a year since you pur up a chapter *pouts* please update it soon cuz I am dying of suspense on what will happen next. ^ ^ Thanks!
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2006 19:55 CDT
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I like it ^^ I think that is definately something different in subject and i like it a lot ^^ I can't wait ot read more ^^
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 16:06 CDT
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Wow, is it me or did she get over her parents quickly? Her mom since nice, but how does she know her?!hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, in-te-res-ting!
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2006 00:09 CDT
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He is soooooooooooo wrong!!!! lol But I can see a lil lovy dovy.... hhhuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu?huuuuuuuuuuuuu? lol. N how is he gonna just nibble onher ear like a cracker, he don't know her like dat?!!!???
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 17:44 CDT
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Because he can?! Thats so ignant! But anyways. . . what did he mean when he said 'adjustments'? That sound painful, its like "I just kinda changed her heart and put her spleen in her arm. . ." lol. Update soon, don't forget about Kyo!
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Reviewed By: Sonyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 21:39 CDT
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nice story. i can;t wai to read more. it sounds very original to me so far. well update soon, and make a little more longer. Ja-Ne =^_^=
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 18:40 CDT
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VAMPIRES! OMG! Did her parents get killed by the vamps?! I hope not, cuz i liked them, they were my kind of parents! Nad who's this Kyo?! Wut does he look like, wut does akina look like?! OMG! I don't know, either i missed it or u did, hopefully i did! Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Awsome!
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 14:20 CDT
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I love the story and it made me excited to know that there would be more chapters ^^ Yay! So anyways I hope you up date and your so on my favorites ^^ Keep it up and I look forward to your next chapter
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 21:15 CDT
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OOO! WUT HAPPENED TO AYUMI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What was that power that shot out her hand and what is this 'being' and whats up wit those nasty looking thingis that attacked her? But what happened to ayumi's parents? Oh, I'm so sad that i don't know! waaaaaaaaaa! Guess I'' just have to hela myself by watching the rest of the Miss Universe competition... commercials are over! Let the healing begin!lol
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 01:23 CDT
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btw, ure italics isn't working. . . unless ure using notepad. . .
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 01:20 CDT
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OOOO! UPDATE! HURRY! U CAN'T JUST END SOMETHING LIKE THAT!!!! HOW COULD YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT UPSETS ME! PLEASE UPDATE! Your going on my faverites!
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