Reviewed By: XxbriichigoxX [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2009 14:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this had to be one of, if not, the best slayers fanfics that i've ever read. it was simply amazing! i wish that this was the real season of try. you explained everything very well. i've only read the first few chapters of the aqualord mangas, but i understood everything very well b/c of how you were describing things. i also loved luna's role in this fic. i actually cried when she told lina that she was fated to die b/c i had gotten really into this fic. luna's role was an extremely important one and i think how you protrayed her gave everyone a new light on who she is to lina. lina and gourry's relationship was hilarious, yet romantic and normal for them. i was crying from laughing so hard at some points b/c i could see lina yelling at him and gourry coming back with some sny remark. also, the love scenes were very nicely done. none of it was raunchy and disgusting like in other fics that i've read. it was, in a way, cute. xD zel and ameria's relationship was too cute. how they reacted with each other was normal, but you really showed how they do like one another. i kinda wish that you had pushed it a little further with them, but it would've ruined the flow of the fic. even though i don't know lyos or shizuri too well, i found that they were interesting characters and that you portrayed them very well. same with filia, who i couldn't stand in the anime. you made her much more interesting and mature, but still kept her overly focus self in mind. i also like sylphiel in here. i've always dispised her just b/c i found her very annoying, but you made her tolerable. and how you got her and lyos in a cute little pair was adorable. :3 the only problem that i found was some small grammar mistakes and a few spelling errors. nothing too detremental though. we all make little errors and i've probably have made a few spelling and grammatical errors in writing this review. all in all, this was fantastic, amazing, stupendous, must i go on? i'll probably end up reading this over again and i know that i'll be recomending this to my friends whom are slayers fans. thank you so much and i look foward to reading more of your fanfic soon. much love, Bri.
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