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| "Snow Angel" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Jade Phoenix On: May 11, 2007 15:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey! Okay so I had read this one before, but I wasn't that well acquainted with Saiyuki, so there. So yeah, nice piece... though why haven't you completed it? I mean, it's cute and Sanzo's cute and Goku's cute and the view's cute ( okay, so about everything's cute... XD ), so continue it! Oh btw, there were a few grammatical mistakes ( most probably, you overlooked them, cuz I don't know you making such ) ; just thought I'd point them out. Later then! Ciao!
| Reviewed By: Sai_Saishi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 07:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
aww ^^ very cute ^^ I enjoyed the way you described things, and your over all wording of lines and paragraphs ^^ very effective ^^ also, a very cute story. (though I've already stated that....) nicely done *^
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