| "Irresistible Force" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: great start
Reviewed By: juanjoseso [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2008 21:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man that was a great chapter I hope you don't take long with next one
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Reviewed By: Shard [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 00:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write some more to this, I know your probably working on other stories and busy with other stuff, but I just think this one is so cool. You did such a good job with the concept and the characterization that the story job seems to flow. Anyway I hope you can get around to updating this one (soon I hope),and I look forward to reading more of your writing.
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Title: Permission
Reviewed By: Black Waltz [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2007 06:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi. I really enjoyed this chapter and I hope you update soon. I was also wondering... would it be okay if I borrowed your idea of Keitaro being the Marvel Comics character Juggernaut, with your permission, of course?
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Reviewed By: triviatrap1982 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 21:09 CDT
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Hey this is a very interesting take on the Love Hina stories. I'm glad that Keitaro for once is not being used as a whipping boy this time.
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Reviewed By: Scyggy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 07:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Heya GH, I just found this one. Juggernaut Keitaro? You were smoking what? Great idea though. Wonder if the hole in Su's wall will affect the enhanced space of her room? And of course, what Su's relation to the Ruby is. I know you might not ever get back to this one, but it's definitely a fun idea.
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Reviewed By: Shard [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 13:58 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, I hope you get time to update this soon. I beleave I have read this story at least 6 times and every time I get a good laugh and wonder where you can take this story next so many possabilties.
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Reviewed By: Godslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2006 22:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this so far, and I hope you continue it.
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Reviewed By: Vaal On: September 03, 2006 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very enjoyable story (crossover?). I can't wait to see how this diverts from the original storyline and what direction you'll take it. Good job!
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Reviewed By: Delurious On: September 03, 2006 17:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is what happens when authors make use of the forums, they create fan fics worth reading. Realy good beginning, and I can't wait for the next chapter.
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