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| "Parting the Steam" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: dark irish sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2007 15:10 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome! absolutely fantastic!!!!^_^ if i could rate this story with stars you would have the whole freaking night sky!!! lol. ^_^' but yes, i really enjoyed this story, almost makes me sad it was so short. T.T ^_^
| Title: WOW!!! ^_^
Reviewed By: bugaboo107 On: October 28, 2006 19:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, one word!!! WOW!!! The title was what got me first, Parting the Steam". You captured the characters Tohru and Kyo very well, and created wonderful lemons. Great setting and I love the eagerness in both sides. Your style is very good, "white panorama", great details and descriptions! I look forward to reading more of your stories!!! I love Fruits Basket love!!! ^_^ Kyo is so cute!!! Thanks for the brillant story!!!
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