| "Full Metal Alchemist Somewhere between Science and Alchemy" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Himura Kirei On: April 18, 2007 17:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story! And you stopped right as the plot was really starting to thicken too! I'm looking forward to seeing how you get Ed back and how he'll react to the big news. Also, I'd like to see more of how things are handled on Winry's side since they have a pretty big cover-up to pull off. I love sweet EdWin stories like this and there just aren't enough on this site. Thank you for giving me my fix!
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Reviewed By: Shatara On: November 15, 2006 13:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE WRITE MORE OF THIS FANTASTIC STORY
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Reviewed By: lasing_na_pusa [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2006 11:51 CDT
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chapters 4 and 5 were as grand as first three! and i can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: lasing_na_pusa [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2006 20:50 CDT
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Chapter three was as excellent as the first two! keep it up! can't wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: lasing_na_pusa [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2006 20:30 CDT
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wow! another piece of excellent writting! i really enjoyed it and can't wait for the upcoming chapter!
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Reviewed By: Nursie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2006 12:31 CDT
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Thank you so much lasing na pusa!!! Talk about encouragement! I hope to have the next part up sometime tonight... perhaps this evening. Depends on how long I can hide the notebook from my ten year old! =P lottsa hugs!!! Nursie (just a lil note... there's a bit of a surprise coming. I know it's probably predictable at first but everyone has a different writing style so hopefully I can keep ya'll interested)
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Reviewed By: Nursie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2006 12:26 CDT
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I've rated this fic for mature content that will happen as the fic is written. I don't just go into wild naughtiness without a storyline, but trust me, it's coming and I do hope that all that are of age to read it and like that sorta thing enjoy it. There will be alot of graphic Ed/Winry stuff probably within the next chapter or so. So if you're an Ed/Winry fan as I am you'll probably like it. I know I'll love writing it!!! Sorry if I confused anyone with the rating... I had some trouble uploading and found some mistakes when editing. It's possible that during that time the explaination for the rating was lost somewhere in my mindless rambling. =)
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Reviewed By: lasing_na_pusa [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 19:27 CDT
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this was an excellent piece of writting! can't wait for the next chapter.
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