| "Getting Ready..." Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 23:33 CDT
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omg! this chapter was frickin funny!! love the story. update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: dyscordofchaos On: June 28, 2007 08:17 CDT
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love the story
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Reviewed By: CrazySasuke On: June 27, 2007 01:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story!! hee hee... i vote for a foursome ^_^
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Reviewed By: Nekogirl3 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 10:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I loved this fourth chapter. Poor Naruto is having one bad dream after a other. I love it! Also, lets make this Gaara X Naruto. There already is enough SasuNaru and NejiNaru doesn't really work for me. GaaNaru is just hott and so understandable. Anyway, I loved Naruto's reaction to seeing Gaara. Can anyone say love at first sight.
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Reviewed By: l&P On: June 23, 2007 12:31 CDT
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yay! Uchiha won lol ...he did right O.o you know NejixGaara is really hot! But sasuke for naruto is best v.v love it sooo ^.^
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Reviewed By: Plastic Spoons [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 01:49 CDT
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i've only read the first 2 chapters and i like it really, but the "believe it" is kinda annoying..heh. no offense. :]
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Reviewed By: Mary Love [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 00:29 CDT
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PLEASE CONTINUE!!!! I LOVE this story!!! I want to know how it ends, nya!
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Reviewed By: Momijilol [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 17:54 CDT
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I love this fanfic! please continue! ^^ I vote for...Neji
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: Knightchan On: June 01, 2007 16:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would really like to know who does Naruto get in the end. In my own oppinion i would like to have three different endings one with sasuke one with Gara and one with neji. The person I would really like Naruto to be with is GARA. they would be so cute together.
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Reviewed By: Tenisha-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2007 10:26 CDT
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oh come come you must want to update for all the reader....mainly me lol anyways this a freakin good update soon
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Title: Yay!!!
Reviewed By: Sifl On: March 07, 2007 22:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMA!!! I love this story. You really should hurry up with the next chapter. I love that bit with Concrete Wall. Tres fab. Anywho, I think it would make the most sense if Naruto ended up with Gaara. Although, I wouldn't mind if he ended up with Neji. Anyone but Sasuke!!! Love ya!
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Title: OO
Reviewed By: bloodkitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 18:26 CST
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*drum roles well.... its the author here speaking and i just wanna thnk all u peeps 4 reviewing! oh and terribly srry for all the grammer stuff... yah i dont like english very much and it apparently doesnt like me either :D so yah.
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Reviewed By: Sifl On: February 10, 2007 23:35 CST
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I'm soo sorry! That last one was really insulting now that I re-read it! I didn't mean to sound like such a bitch. I'm sooo sorry! I really did love the story! This is the first comment I've ever put on a finfic, and I've read A LOT, I mean that, too. That just goes to show how much I enjoyed it. But seriously, I just couldn't let the spelling/grammar go untouched. Once again, I'm sorry for my earlier bitchy-ness!
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Reviewed By: Sifl On: February 10, 2007 23:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The "Wet Dream" was really hott. I love the bit about the concrete wall. Also, was the first part a dream or did you Tarentino it? Now, I assume it was a dream, but I can't be sure. Anyway, it was hott. Two things though, one: STOP MAKING FUN OF MY SHIKA!; two: dude, your spelling/grammar really suck. I mean it. I would have given you a zero if I could have. I can edit for you if you want. That's my shit man. Any time you need an editor just hit me up man. My email is Aji.kan@hotmail.com. See yah.
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Reviewed By: cooleo On: January 31, 2007 15:44 CST
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This really is cool to read. Since you started the story off with Gaara, I prefer it end that way as well. Unfortunately, you don't too many GaaNaru fics, so it'd be cool if you made this one. I look forward to an update!
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