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| "Out with the Old, In with the New" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] | Title: he he
Reviewed By: Phoenixangle On: January 02, 2007 09:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
'Yuri being phenomenally more intimate with his spork than most people were with their spouses.' ha ha ha couldn't stop laughing! your stories crack me up so much and it just got better excuse me whilst i go and laugh a bit more *runs off in hysterics*
| Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 10:11 CST
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Loved the fic! Hot, sexy, seductive, teasing, and sweet in all the right places! Sad that it's over but it was still bomn as hell!
| Reviewed By: tsukihime [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 23:39 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear Herme, That was a grand finale! I enjoyed reading your story - it was one of the best humor fan fictions I ever read. Keep writing - I'll be happy to read another one of your masterpieces!!! Keep away from infected lettuce and be nice to Tommy! Happy belated B-Day to both of you! . Julia
| Reviewed By: tsukihime [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 13:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear Herme (and Tommy too!), Thank you so much for the early-morning update (it totally made my yesterday!!!!) This chapter was very different from the previous ones. You kept your usual charming style, adding laughs to lighten up the mood, but at the same time parts of the chapter are much more serious, almost angsty! Great job! Wolfy dear was thinking soo hard, and Yuri too… (And for the record no pun intended) Funny how they stay in denial, isn't it? The image of Gwen feeding Gunter a cake… soooo sweet! Gwen with a spoonful of cake: "Say 'Aaaaa'…" *blush* Khm… And no pun intended here as well. (How do I always end up with this double meanings? I think it is my perverted side that sees it this way… What would you say about it, Tommy?) I simply loved the way you used the perfume! Yay to evil queen (some kind of mother she is!) My bet is on a half-show breakfast. I think Yuri is the only one who'll make it. And they would never realize they were played if not for outside help. Someone will spill the beans (or bathwater?)… Probably Celi herself, since she is overly enthusiastic about the whole thing. And the three, always three… They seriously should work more. Not that they need, with all the bidding money. But if I were Wolfram, I would do something about it. Since the puny Wimp could not. I'll be waiting for the next installment… It is the sweetest feeling when I see your updates - I know that I'll be laughing my head off (is it head or other part of human body? *puzzled* whatever… I'll be laughing until the hiccups attack… and then more!) Thank you for writing this wonderful story, Julia
| Title: good god
Reviewed By: wolfram_kyo On: October 25, 2006 14:29 CDT
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well i think i just died....That was an amazing chapter i do believe and quite funny with yuuri's innermonologue as well as wolfram's revelation. I do love how you make a great deal of emotion come through in your writing as well as humor and you play the casanova wolfram off to a T (wolfram is my favorite can't yah tell *gets shot*) But i also like how yuuri turned and said his line 'i will show you how it is to be owned by *Me*' not an exact quote but hey you wrote it so you know what i mean. I love it all and the maids make it even better not to mention the added bonus of picturing gwendal feeding gunter cake ^_^....see yah soon! can't wait until your next one! *gives really big cookie....and a slurpy to Tommy* ^_^
| Reviewed By: tsukihime [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2006 12:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear Herme, I sincerely hope you are ok - after eating that lettuce! If not - let me know, I'll get you the best antibiotics possible. And if you're still unsure, start drinking yogurt with live cultures like bifidus (for example, Stonyfield farms yogurts have those) and you'll be fine. That was such a fun chapter! I should be careful next time and not read it when my laughter can wake people up! Oh, poor Gwendal - I pity him the most… Some things are way too much for this big softy (khhm, no pun intended). I wish also, I could get some blood-replenishing potion for Gunter, since he suffered probably the bloodiest nosebleed in history of both Shin Makoku and Earth during that massage hour!!! I'm impressed thoroughly by Conrad, it looks (or sounds?) like the foul behavior of his charge is starting to affect him… in a most peculiar way! And go, Yuri (yay! I kinda won! Btw to Tommy: I did get my prize, it was the undiluted hilariousness of this chapter, so thank you both!) Is "Ludo" really a game, or that was where the double-meaning turned a bit too thin? Anyway, great chapter and million thanks for my happy mood today! Hope to see your next update soon!!!! Julia ps my husband sends his thanks for my cheerfulness and humbly asks you to update in mornings (west coast time) so by the nightfall his wife would be done with uncontrolled bursts of laughter...
| Reviewed By: wolfram_kyo On: October 19, 2006 08:05 CDT
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woooo more chapter and it is as funnily crazy and cool as the last. I really enjoy this story so you know and I await your next chapter too ^_^. Not to mention I even enjoy reading your author's notes…basically that would be what that is called I believe XD Can't wait to see what is in your next chapter, Mind Over Matter. Btw you really design their comebacks pretty well
| Reviewed By: wolfram_kyo On: October 13, 2006 07:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was an amazing story and still is actually. I was riding wihta friend of mine and reading this and i swear they thought i was crazy i was laughing so hard on that last chapter. I really hope you get the chance to update soon because i am hooked now ^_^
| Reviewed By: tsukihime [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2006 00:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so funny, that my stomach hurts and I think my neighbors are concerned for my mental health now... Thanks a lot for making my evening brighter! I desperately needed a good laugh! And please continue to write!!! I'm putting my bet on Yuri! Go, Demon King!
| Reviewed By: Asaka_Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2006 17:36 CDT
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Love the correct grammar, love the correct spelling, love the awesome plot! Hope you keep the halarity rolling!
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