| "St. Jude" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
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Reviewed By: WheSme On: August 05, 2007 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It Was Rly Good But I Think Dee Should Be A Bit Tougher Lol =]
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Reviewed By: kurisushi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 16:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! You have and amazing talent when it comes to capturing Dee! I was overwhelmed. It was a very touching piece. I have read most of your FAKE fanfics on this site and love every one. You are an amazing writer. I look forward to your next piece. Thank you for sharing your wonderful gift.
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Reviewed By: Sydbeast On: November 25, 2006 12:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My.. you surely did capture Dee better than I've ever seen anyone else try. It still makes me sad though, that here, and with evidence in the book, he really does consider himself a "forever lost cause". Someone beat it out of him! (Preferably Ryo.) x)
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Title: catti-dono
Reviewed By: catti-dono [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2006 18:56 CST
Comment/Review:
Irish-san....I personally thought you captured Dee very well....It was a nice piece...you have talent...maybe you can write Ryo's side next?...That would be nice....(patience not patients...sorry its my job to spell check....laughs)....nice work...cannot wait for more....
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Title: Amazing!!
Reviewed By: Misslady (not signed in) On: November 14, 2006 23:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing piece. I feel that you have captured Dee perfectly! He is definitely hard to capture but you succeeded. This is a truly moving bit of writing. You have a lot of talent! Spelling is definitely something to work on but no worries about it!! You still captured all the emotion and personality of the characters. Please keep up the great work!! You have an amazing talent and your writings are a pleasure to read! Thank you so much for posting this!! Misslady
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