| "The Transience of Memory" Reviews/Comments [ 149 ] |
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Reviewed By: Toast-Girl101 On: November 01, 2010 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
8D omg...... THAT WAS SO TOTALLY AWESOME~!!!!! -bows- dude i love you to an extent unknown to man 8| lol but srsly it rocks!
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Title: Seiner Classic
Reviewed By: WahLaPie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2010 16:08 CDT
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I love this story, it was one of my first Seiner stories and since then I've become a huge Seiner fan. I've read this fic so many times before, I'm shocked that I've never reviewed it... I consider this to be a Seiner classic, anyone who likes Seiner, or even Akuroku or just wants a good Kingdom hearts fic to read, I would recommend this to them. I really can't express how much I really adore this fic, if you ever write any more fics- especially maybe some Seiner or KH fics- I'd love to read them. :3
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Title: OK what just happened?
Reviewed By: FinalFallenFantasy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2009 14:40 CDT
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I just looked and my review's been cut in half... *Sighs*: I really liked this story; I started reading it on ffnet, then followed to dA, then to y!Gallery and finally here, where I found the finished version, which cheered me up immensely. Your spelling and grammar is generally very good, I like your style of writing (not just the lemons) and I found the general storyline very entertaining. And there were lots of lemon so 8D. XD. Heheheh. *shamelessly Seiner and Akuroku fangirls* I look forward to reading more of your stories ^^ Sorry bout that - don't know what happened...
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Reviewed By: FinalFallenFantasy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2009 14:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this story; I started reading it on ffnet, then followed to dA, then to y!Gallery and finally here, where I found the finished version, which cheered me up immensely. Your spelling and grammar is generally very good, I like your style of writing (not just the lemons >.
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Title: AMAZING
Reviewed By: Ex-Why-Zwee On: April 20, 2008 09:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was soooooooo amazing. I was up reading it until one in the morning, because I just could'nt bear to stop anywhere in the middle. I absolutely adored the way you had the seifer/hayner interaction written, how hayner was so like.... cautious and sweet about the whole thing an especially how seifer was trying to be both himself and be as gentle as hayner. The part where he asked who he had to kill, and I could just imagine it and I almost started crying because it was just really real and really beautiful. I think my favorite line though was where Hayner was thinking about what love it, and was love when you needed to touch someone like breathing. That was just really really amazing. And your axel/roxas was pretty amazing too. I loved Axels plan, and how he would leave the organization and forget everything just for a gamble at getting close to Roxas. The only thing I was sad about was that it ended with Axel and Roxas instead of Seifer and Hayner. But like I said, most amazing fic I've read in a really really long time.
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Title: Essence
Reviewed By: Aiko Sleep On: April 13, 2008 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writing was smooth, but there were one or two hiccups here and there. Your words were fluent and I saw few errors. I have never read anything more beautiful and even now tears are not enough to show how glorious this piece of writing is. The beginning was lacking a bit in charisma, but I loved how you portrayed the characters and made it enjoyable to read about them. I gave you a ten overall because I am what many call a critic. I may hate every single word in your story or just demolish a page of it. This story blew me away! I was overjoyed, sad, confused, angry, and hysterical all at the same time. I felt like I could feel the true essence of the story and hold it to me. The only thing I wish had happened is that Hayner would tell Seifer his past. That was the only part I founds was needed. I must say that I am familiar with Roxas and Axel as a pairing, but I have only just recently became a fan of Seifer and Hayner. I have deeply fallen in love with this new pairing and now I am head over heels. The funny thing is that through this whole story I've been listening to Journey's song Don't Stop Believing. I felt that through your story I was safe and there could be nothing better than sitting at my computer eating buttered toast, singing off key to Journey, and watching 4 people fall in love. Some may disagree, but I believe this was the best story I have ever read and I hope can one day aspire to create such beauty. Thank you~
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Reviewed By: Shinimegami7 On: February 02, 2008 22:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AGH!!! That was awesome! I was so impressed. I even came over from FF.net to read it after I saw your profile. I've never read Hayner x Seifer... but I think that it'll be a regular thing for me from now on. Amazing fic.
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Reviewed By: katkola [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 21:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
shoot, meant to hit 10 *shrugs*
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Title: NOOOOO!
Reviewed By: katkola [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 21:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gosh, loved the story. I was up at midnight reading it...kept on reading right after school. I was drawn by the deep descriptions and consistency to the game. So, no I am REEEEALY SAD that it's at an end. SeiferxHayner is my new favorite!
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Title: awsome story
Reviewed By: heartless girl On: August 24, 2007 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey luv the story theres not a whole lot of Hayner and Seifer stories out there which is a real bummer there perfect for eachother oh i have a question what does akuroku mean it comes up a lot when you talk about Roxas and Axel another perfect couple i might add p.s. do you know any more awsome stories with Hayner and Seifer as a couple or any other stories that are a good read anyways love the story so far i'm on chapter 11 evl nana so far keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: KageRune On: July 18, 2007 21:55 CDT
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Yay, a happy ending where no one we uber love for their gayness dies~
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Reviewed By: KageRune On: July 18, 2007 21:43 CDT
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Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee (my reviews are as useless as ever)
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Reviewed By: KageRune On: July 18, 2007 21:28 CDT
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Ah, haven't gotten around to actually reading until now. So many distractions. I really haven't much to say XP.
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Reviewed By: KageRune On: July 17, 2007 19:44 CDT
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I FINALLY FOUND THIS STORY AGAIN X3 WHEEEEEEEEEEEEE~~ Time to get reading I suppose.
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Title: Faaaaaaaaaantastic!
Reviewed By: Stormys Toyshop On: June 09, 2007 12:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you!!!!!!! It's so hard to find a fic done so well!!!!! Your characters were believeable and funny, and the story kicked an unbelievable amount of ass!!! The only bad thing is... now I can't find anymore Hayner/Seifer fics!!!!! *sigh* you've gotten me hooked darlin'...
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