| "A Different Kind of Lonely" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Reviewed By: slk1229 On: May 18, 2008 13:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you are are a really good writer! Please continue writing. I would like the pairing to be Kagome/Hatori. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: dreamingxooxwish On: April 03, 2008 11:47 CDT
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great idea you've got here! you should really continue with the story!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2008 06:23 CDT
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this is good so far, although except for kagome's name i dont see anything of inuyasha in the story. kagome's personality isnt even the same.
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 23:32 CST
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geez Ayame *shakes head* I don't really care how the pairings go. As long as no one gets hurt.
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2008 15:48 CST
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hm i like it
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Reviewed By: Kai3anime [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2008 01:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Definitely interesting looking forward to another update
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Reviewed By: Killingfrost On: December 31, 2007 13:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: sakura-bell On: March 29, 2007 06:34 CDT
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Now there is a mystery. So exciting now, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 16:01 CDT
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I really loved it. Great work! Keep it up and update asap please.
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Reviewed By: crystal lilith [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 04:19 CDT
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it's good, I'm liking it...the only unusual aspect about this story it having Kagome suddenly begin targetted towards her life...Oo, is this going to be a pairing revolving around Yuki and Gome? Personally I'll refer her with any of the three older Sohmas (Hatori, Ayame, & Shiguri)...*shrugs*...
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 02:17 CDT
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I don't know how, but I must have missed the 3rd chapter, so now I'm caught up. I'm still new to FB, but I'm enjoying your dialogue and the interaction among the Sohmas. They're just made for humor, aren't they? Have you picked your pairing yet? I think you've got a great set-up for wither Yuki/Kag or Hatori/Kag. I can't imagine who would have been shooting at her -- or was it just at Shigure's house? Very intriguing. I'll be looking forward to more.
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Reviewed By: red haired demon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 22:05 CDT
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update please
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Reviewed By: sakura-bell On: February 06, 2007 05:19 CST
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Please continue this story cos it's fantasic! Loved reading it
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Reviewed By: Raizen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 06:59 CST
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I really enjoy what you have come up with so far and hope to see more
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Title: yuki/kagome
Reviewed By: tifa_luvers_cloud On: January 29, 2007 00:11 CST
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i really loved the second chapter!and i really hope it becomes a yuki/kagome story!
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