| "White Plum Blossoms" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: anonomous_angel On: April 05, 2007 16:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's sweet, In an almost innocent way. I liked all the comparisons between the flowers and the girls. I'd never thought of Kagome as the time between winter and spring but it does work. You kept the character of Hinata very well and you did Kagome pretty good too, Seeing as we don't know what she'd be like when she's 17 it's anyone's guess. All in all this is a good short story and I thought the tough and tender love part was really cute. Love your stories ;) CHELLE
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Reviewed By: vicky666 On: December 10, 2006 13:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked it a lot! i believe it calls for a sequal or a story at least of how they came to meet. That would be such a cool story!
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Reviewed By: ElectrifiedMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2006 09:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
How incredibly sweet! And what an interesting pairing! This is the very first Hinata/Kagome pairing I've ever seen. It was really fun to read too. Hope you write more soon! Ja
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Reviewed By: Devilangel620 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 07:54 CST
Comment/Review:
aaw! cute. I never thought of them as a pairing but now people might come out and do pairings with Kagome that are totally unexpected. thx for making this, it was nice to read.
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