| "The Loneliness of Urashima Keitaro" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: ibskib [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2012 02:28 EDT
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The whole cycle thing is an interesting, and as good explanation as anything for the bad tempers, and the icky harem comment was pretty amusing, :-) |
Reviewed By: gargle On: January 11, 2008 21:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it, Melancholy is a great Manga/Anime title, and you pulled in the elements of the series quite well. I would like to see how the cycle breaks (if it does), and how Naru copes with hew remembering everything. That seemed particularly evil to me (Which I liked it). You also delivered a sound reason for Keitaro being able to pass the exam without Naru, and the possible reprecussions for it. I would love to see this fic continued.
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Reviewed By: Tezza1502 On: December 29, 2007 04:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Howdy! I read this once, a while ago, & had no idea what it was about. Other than it seemed to be a nice fic about Keitaro getting fed up with the way he has been treated by the Hinata Honies. (The ending threw me slightly, though.) Since then, the first two volumes of 'The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya' have landed down under. I finally 'get' where you borrowed the basic plot from. And what a damn fine job you did, altering it to fit 'Love Hina'. Since I have no idea how things finished for the SOS brigade, I can't ask you to continue this with a specific aim in mind. In fact, I not sure it even needs continueing. All in all, nicely done. Good job! T
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Reviewed By: allan165 On: December 11, 2007 23:26 EST
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I am at a loss for words here im not quite sure how to take the ending. it was all making sense and was a well thought out story but that ending confused the heck out of me im actually a little afraid that keitaro is god
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Reviewed By: quamp On: November 26, 2007 20:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall, the story is pretty good. However, I don't see how this relates to The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya. I don't see any of the Haruhi characters in it, no mention of the SOS brigade. This would have been better under Love Hina alone.
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Reviewed By: 091234 On: August 18, 2007 16:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
The part about the eating watermelons for anemia, I heard watermelons get rid off water weight. that's all. Liked it.
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Title: Great Job
Reviewed By: shadow kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 02:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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that was Great! i can't wait till you update!
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Reviewed By: Vilkath [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 03:09 EST
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I liked it overall, angst without everyone dying or being raped. It's getting to the point where I can't take another pointless Shinobu sucide. I also loved the twist at the end.. I do hope to see more from this.
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Title: what the....?
Reviewed By: Shinden [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 22:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That. Was. COOL. I'll keep an eye on this for updates. VERY nice twist. A++++++++++++++++++++
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Title: Ok... that was a twist
Reviewed By: Godslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 17:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed your new story just I as enjoyed your previous ones. Writing a 10000+ story as a one shot isn't easy and I appreciate the effort you put into creating this. It read like a normal Love Hina fanfiction story then you threw in a strange twist, while I liked it I'm curious as to why.
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