| "Kagomella" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 17:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is good update soon please
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Reviewed By: Nami_wave_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 11:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Great so far keep it up
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 18:22 CST
Comment/Review:
Well I'm willing to bite. I will reserve any big/binding comments of the negative or overly positive stance until I read a few more chapters. Right now I think your writing style could use a little polish and tweaking but this usually comes through experience, trail and error, etc. The storyline is not original but that is where your personal spin on the plotline takes place. Right now you could go either way with this. I do hope this story has a promising future since it is intriguing. You might want to fix the summary though. It's a bit wordy but it doesn't really say much about the story. It kinda sounds like you were talking out loud as you wrote it and that's how you left it. I happen to like fairytales so I took a chance but most of the other people are looking for someting that catches their eye or something that mystifies them. Anyway see you next update.
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Title: Hey there!
Reviewed By: Tohru Hotaru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2007 12:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I'm a big fan of the good old fairytales, and cinderella is my personal fave. I think that you gave it a good strong start, I can't wait to read more! Please update soon! from Tohruhotaru -_-
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